Friday at the sandbox - Part 6 "wise moves"

Jul 19, 2011 15:02

Summary - Modern day AU/AU. Ennis, Jack, kids, a playground, coffee and donuts...

Warnings - none
Length - c400 words
Feedback - yes please!

Jack finally learns Ennis' name...

clickety click )

fridayatthesandbox

Leave a comment

Comments 46

Great chapter anna1990 July 20 2011, 01:42:15 UTC
Loved the pictures too!

Reply

Re: Great chapter annabirmingham July 20 2011, 22:14:52 UTC
Thanks!
Anna x

Reply


gwylliondream July 20 2011, 02:55:57 UTC
Oh, this is so wonderful! I love how it's unwrapping so slowly- just right! Thanks for the pics! What a special place!

XO
Donna

Reply

annabirmingham July 20 2011, 22:16:37 UTC
Thanks Donna! It's one of my favourite playgrounds in the area where I live - it's the only one with a sandbox (that I know of) and I love the lake - and McDonalds is quite nice too...
Anna x

Reply


bbmgirlfan July 20 2011, 03:42:38 UTC
Was glad to see this posted! Such a cute story :).

Jeanine

Reply

annabirmingham July 20 2011, 22:16:58 UTC
Thanks Jeanine - glad you are still liking it!
Anna x

Reply


trekfan July 20 2011, 03:50:26 UTC
so they have a DATE! I feel for poor Ennis not getting to see his girls much. But at least Jack is trying to make him feel good. yeah a date at mickey D's! <3

more please (I loved the playground pics)

Reply

annabirmingham July 20 2011, 22:17:43 UTC
Yeah, probably not the classiest place for a lunch date, but you know, needs must and all that!
More soon :)
Anna x

Reply

trekfan July 21 2011, 04:10:30 UTC
well if they hurry they can get a mango pineapple smoothie for a buck. (well any of the smoothies they have) The special ends this Sun (I got one today for lunch and it's yummy)

Reply


eandj July 20 2011, 04:36:07 UTC
love the pics
it's too bad they already left for their date and we can't see them sitting together. But I'm happy to wait and read about their lunch date
such a cute story
thanks so much
Paula

Reply

annabirmingham July 20 2011, 22:18:58 UTC
Thanks Paula - yeah, I could really picture them sitting there when I took the photos! Lunch date to come soon :)
Anna x

Reply


Leave a comment

Up