AC2 Fic: Counting

[assassin_lucy]

Title: Counting
Rating:T
Characters:Ezio/Leonardo
Summary: Based off the carriage scene, where Ezio tells Leonardo to go on ahead and takes on a small army by himself.

Comments

[alexb49]

A sweet story. I do have to say that when I replay this game I sorely miss my beloved smoke bombs until I can get them back again.

[assassin_lucy]

Thanks! And yeah, me too - I always use all of my smokebombs in the mission where you fly into the Palazzo Ducale. I just wish I had them earlier, or more of them.

XD

[dreamerchaos]

Daaaaaw~

I love it. Ezio taking the chance to stand against the guards on his own because he knows Leonardo would be in danger.

T^T Ugh, I'm not looking forward to playing the carriage scene. I'm petrified I'm gonna kill Leonardo by accident.

Re: XD

[assassin_lucy]

Thanks!

It's actually what Ezio does - he says the part about them being here for him, not Leo.

Surprisingly, I never accidentally killed Leo. He yelled at me several times for nearly tipping the carriage over, but both he and Ezio survived.

[chthonic_scion]

Awwh, short but very nice! I like the structure with all the counting ^^
And a lovely ending!

[assassin_lucy]

Thanks! I've had the idea for a while, but I was never able to get down until I tried the counting.

[yumearashi]

Aww, cuteness!

[assassin_lucy]

Thanks!

=)

[secretcapulet]

This is a really well written story, and it flows really well, especially with the sort of numbering you included. Only one little suggestion I have to make; "At least he was fighting to protect life, instead of to bring death." The last bit is a bit blocky and awkward, so maybe switch "instead of" to "rather than", so that it flows a little easier?
But other then that, great job! :)

Re: =)

[assassin_lucy]

Thanks! And thanks for the suggestion!