[1] Fanfic: Shine A Light (1/2)

[atenais_pala]

Title: Shine A Light
Author: Atenais
Rating: NC-15 (maybe?)
Length: Two chapters
Words: 4844
Pairings: GTOP (SeungHyun/JiYong)
Genre: Canon, Angst
Beta: aislinoriel. Thank you again, Tegan.
Summary: What happened backstage at Shine A Light.
Disclaimer: Unfortunately, these boys don't belong to me. But the story certainly is the fruit of my imagination.
Warning:

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[fullofwishes]

Again, I have to say how much I enjoyed beta-ing this for you. Thanks for letting me. :3
You and 0ddie13 are amazing.

Quote time! (Some of my favourites. If I could I'd just quote the entire thing back at you though. XD)

SeungRi, with wide eyes, was finally, speechless.

Bahahaha...I don't know how you manage it, but you make such a wonderfully neutral narrative even when pointing out character "quirks". I adore it.

couples taking advantage of the cold to walk closer

I love that about winter. Siiiiiiiiiiigh.

Now JiYong did not seem to be the fragile being that was crying just a few minutes ago, he looked like a mythological entity, a judge, holding the sword and scales, and SeungHyun didn’t know if his heart would pass the test, in the end, did he not feel heavy with guilt for what he had done?

Whoa. What gorgeous and profound imagery.

The thing is, well, everything we have should be kept in the darkness, I can’t say it to anyone and sometimes it’s so frustrating. I can’t touch you when I want to, we have to be on the lookout all the

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[atenais_pala]

Tegan, you have no idea how grateful I am for deserve your help, your time and your comment.

I really know that I'm not a good writer and I know that so much got lost in translation, but I think you really comprehended what I tried to tell.

I know that my style is very descriptive and this isn't attractive for readers, but if you liked, this was worth it.

By the way, you quoted my favourite lines.

I don't have words enough to say thank you, but I can try... Thank you. ♥

[atenais_pala]

Thank you so much, hikariedinie. Since this is just my second fic I'm really glad to know that you liked it.

About the cliffhanger, I know, I couldn't resist. But if you wanna know the second part is done, and I posted here.

Thank you again. ♥

[k_pop4life]

Im going to re-read this later because its really late and i have to sleep BUT I WILL BE BACK and i already read it in spanish
Mwahahahah xD

JQLANXLAALALAXNJAO

[k_pop4life]

English or spanish? 
Okay well i read this before and i have to say it's lovely reading it once again! Altough i like the spanish better because of the beautiful descriptions xD  but I still love both of the version now what i liked about this? EVERYTHING! but why does JI need to talk? Don't tell me they are breaking up or anything! I will be very sad *pouts* 
NO SE CUANTAS VECES LO HE LEIDO PERO QUIERO DECIRTE QUE ES MUY LINDO LAS DESCRIPCIONES ESPECIALMENTE Y EL AMOR QUE LOS DOS SIENTEN UNO AL OTRO AL LEERLO!  
Tu eres buenisima Polly xD escribe mas ya quiero la segunda parte! 
Estoy ansiosa por saber que va a pasar! 
Mi parte favorita seria cuando ellos se estan besando por que lo haces ver como un acto tan dulce y a la veces tan apasionado que me descontrola y me hace sentir escalofrios (Y ES ENSERIO)

Baby todavia me tienes que mostrar la segunda parte primero xD 

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[atenais_pala]

No importa si es en inglés o castellano, Naty, lo importante es que a ti te gustó mi fic. Esto me hace super feliz, no tienes idea.

Y tus comments tienen el poder de poner una sonrisa en mi cara. No hay comentarios como los tuyos, eres la mejor.

Muchas gracias, nena. Gracias por tus palabras. ¡Te quiero! ♥

[ludagitsune]

Spot!!

[atenais_pala]

I hope you liked it.

By the way, the second part is done, and I posted here.

[ludagitsune]

Finally!! I stareed reading and then lost it XD

That was pretty tense, I wonder if they were like that for real

[atenais_pala]

No problem, I'm always forgetting things.

Did you like? I'm curious about their real personalities too.
Thank you for commenting.

[atenais_pala]

I know you're a great GTOP shipper, pianolatte, so your comment means so much to me.

I'm glad that you liked my small contribution to this fandom.
Thank you!!! ♥