[1] Fanfic: Shine A Light (1/2)

[atenais_pala]

Title: Shine A Light
Author: Atenais
Rating: NC-15 (maybe?)
Length: Two chapters
Words: 4844
Pairings: GTOP (SeungHyun/JiYong)
Genre: Canon, Angst
Beta: aislinoriel. Thank you again, Tegan.
Summary: What happened backstage at Shine A Light.
Disclaimer: Unfortunately, these boys don't belong to me. But the story certainly is the fruit of my imagination.
Warning:

Comments

[atenais_pala]

Tu más que nadie has comprendido todo lo que he intentado decir con mi fic. Por que si vamos a ser sinceros, no hay un plot para este historia, sino que es un episodio de celos entre dos personas que tienen un relación. Cosa bastante común entre las parejas. Pero la vida esta hecha de los pequeños dramas, son las cosas del día día que nos desquician, que nos sacan de nuestras casillas.

Gracias por tu ayuda, gracias por tu amistad y gracias por tu generosidad. En serio, ha significado mucho para mí. Nunca te podré agradecer lo suficiente.

Ahora es tu turno de escribir una fic GTOP. ♥

[dalpaengi]

This is so good! I read your other part of the fic and didn't comment at the time because I was reading it over the phone but I really want to say ...the ambience and tone of this story is really appealing. It evokes a lot.
I like your characterization of Jiyong because I think underneath it all he really seeks the approval and support of others he's close to. It's like a gauze that holds together all the confidence he puts out.

I loved Seung hyun in this as well -
the longing he expressed. He's not just big and bad and manly, he's a passionate person.

You have a great grasp on internal dialogue that I have only seen two other gtop writers use. I like your style more though because it's concise and raw.

"Bahahaha...I don't know how you manage it, but you make such a wonderfully neutral narrative even when pointing out character "quirks". I adore it." - aisinoriel (YES YES she's right)

I haven't favorited a gtop fic in a long time but I just did yours. <3

[atenais_pala]

Don't really matter if you didn't comment before, you did now and this made me really happy (oh, my god, I'm really repeating myself, but what can I do? All these good comments made me really happy!).

I really tried write every little insignificant detail, because we know, nothing is meaningless in real life, the little dramas change us a lot, not the great wars. Every one of us have his little battles to deal. I'm glad that you understood and liked this point.

Maybe something can sound weird, since I wrote this in my language, but I believe the person who translated that into English and my beta made a great work, I can say that you're reading what I wrote.

The second part is done, and I posted here.

Thank you for commenting. ♥

[f_i_x_m_e]

Pollyana unnie, you've outdone yourself this time!
This is amazing!

In the distance was the noise of a siren, outside the night devoured the city, in the kitchen the clock continued its monotonous clicking. And in the living room...Ah, in the living room, two people loved each other and nothing else.

That was my favourite part.
I melted~:3

I'm excited for the next part!

Kudos to oddie13 and Tegan baby too!♥

[atenais_pala]

Oh, Kaitlin, you spoil me so much.

I'm really glad that you liked this chapter. I know I'm not a good writer, but I tried my best. You know how much I love this couple.

Thanks for your comment. ♥

[jiyonglikesme]

Oh dear you're so cruel, why it has to be cliffhanger??? *kidding for the cruel part XD
it was awesome!
great that I could read this one~and the next part pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeee :)
and Shine a Light concert? ohh I love you for that *hug

[atenais_pala]

Sitta, thank you for your comment.

Sorry about the cliffhanger, but I couldn't resist. (Yes, I'm really cruel).

The second part took me so long, but it's done and I posted here.

I hope you like! <3

[atenais_pala]

Bea, tu sabes que eres la culpada por hacerme postear este fic, ¿no? Ya que en un principio yo traduje mis fics al castellano para ti.

Tu sabes como me encantan tus fics y saber que la mía te ha gustado me hace mucho feliz, no tienes idea. Sé que mi fic no se ve muy interesante, a veces me pierdo en las descripciones, infelizmente este es mi estilo y por ello sé que mis historias no son atractivas.

Pero si a ti te ha gustado, entonces nada importa. Muchas gracias por tus comments y por tu incondicional apoyo. Thanks... ♥