[1] Fanfic: Shine A Light (1/2)

[atenais_pala]

Title: Shine A Light
Author: Atenais
Rating: NC-15 (maybe?)
Length: Two chapters
Words: 4844
Pairings: GTOP (SeungHyun/JiYong)
Genre: Canon, Angst
Beta: aislinoriel. Thank you again, Tegan.
Summary: What happened backstage at Shine A Light.
Disclaimer: Unfortunately, these boys don't belong to me. But the story certainly is the fruit of my imagination.
Warning:

Comments

[lilacblossoms]

oooh don't leave us with a cliffhanger like that! hahaha when will you post the next part? /awaits it with glee

I wish I could read it in your language too. I'm really interested in the aspects of translation, the problems one faces when having to adopt the story to another language. I mostly write in english from the beginning when writing fanfiction, but now I'm actually writing in Swedish and I fear that the translation will in one way or another take out the flow of the fic.

But, anyway, I'm friending you. (Have been wanting to do so for a while but as I am so shy I have hesitated.) I hope you want to friend me back, I mean, kpop noonas/unnies need to stick together after all!

:D

[lilacblossoms]

And yes, what I wanted to say but forgot: I really like your descriptions of the surroundings and the atmosphere. The city with all it's people for example.

I also found it to be a good thing that you put part of the beginning in the assistants pov, and that you introduced the characters without telling their names.

[atenais_pala]

Sometimes I think I'm very descriptive and it's a risk, because this can be really boring but I can't help myself. I'm happy to see that you liked, Lilac. Very happy indeed.

and that you introduced the characters without telling their names.
I was playing here, I was thinking "people would realize who is who if I don't tell the names?". Again, I'm glad that you liked it.

The second part is done, and I posted here.

[lilacblossoms]

I like descriptive parts a lot. And it's always a risk being boring when including such things. I guess it has to do with the overall flow of the fic, its length and so on. On the other hand I think that goes with all writing, dialogues can be boring too (that is my big problem when writing.) It's all about how one handles the words I guess. The only way to find the answer to that is to write more. I hope you will!

I saw that you had posted the second part but until now I haven't gotten around to read it because of all christmas preparations. But right now I'm waiting for someone to upload the GDTOP ALBUM SINCE IT'S APPARENTLY GOING TO BE RELEASED IN, LIKE, 1 HOUR OR SO, AFTER WHAT I'VE READ (excited much?) so now must be the perfect time to read it. :D I have no regrets to download it since I've already pre-payed for a copy. (I wonder which color it will be.)

So, yes, off to read fic.

[atenais_pala]

I think Ji loves act like the drama queen who he is.

alchemywow, I'm so happy to see that you liked this. I know sometimes be very descriptive is kind boring, but I can't help myself.

Well, the second part is done, and I posted here. I hope you keep liking this story.

[dyealer]

this is good...amazing...just keep on doing this..you're great.!!

[atenais_pala]

Hi, dyealer, I'm really happy with your comment. Thank you!

The second part is done, and I posted here. ^^

[sexpervert]

I must admit I was reluctant to read this, bcuz I don't really like fanfics.
But, damn~ This was really, really good and I definitely want to read the second part. I wanna know why do they need to talk~~~

And I really, really like your writing ^^ I try to write like that but I fail hugely (if that word exists lol)

[atenais_pala]

Baby, your comment made me really happy. You liked my fic even when you don't like fics that much.

I can't describe how honoured I felt by your words. Thank you, thank you so much.

Ah, I know you already read the second part, but the English version is here.

♥

[i_am_mellisa]

oh, good!
waiting for more)
thank u)

[atenais_pala]

Thanks for your comment, i_am_mellisa.
I'm really happy that you think this fic is good.