Fic: PleasedonttellWally

Jun 27, 2011 19:20

Today was possibly one of the worst bad days Bart had ever had.

Bart stood outside the apartment door anxiously, unsure if this was really what he wanted to do. He ran away again, but only made it as far as Illinois before turning back and ending up right back in front of the door. On the one hand, Tim said Nightwing was an awesome big brother ( Read more... )

bart allen, dick grayson

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kestral_kitsune June 28 2011, 00:17:51 UTC
pleeaasssee tell me there gooing to be more 0-0

hehehe Dick teaching Bart is an interesting concept.

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aurora_foxglove June 28 2011, 03:09:00 UTC
I'm glad you like the story! I'm not sure there'll be any more since I already have three other projects I want to get done on top of rl craziness but a conversation between Wally and Dick has been trying to form itself in my head. We'll see where that goes.

As for Dick teaching Bart, I don't even /know/ where that came from. After I had the idea though, I kinda couldn't believe someone hadn't written it sooner. There's a fic with the Bat training Superboy. After that, there's really nothing unthinkable!

Out of curiosity, which part did you like best? I did a lot of new stuff in this fic and I'm trying to see what works.

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kestral_kitsune June 28 2011, 21:01:20 UTC
I really like the interaction between Dick and Bart, Its like he's at first just humoring him, but then he really gets concerned after learning Wally is basically being a jerk to him. that and the fact that he can understand the speed-talking XD

and the fact that Bart automatically lets him know he'd be annoying if Dick tried to train him in anything.

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green_animation June 28 2011, 13:47:58 UTC
This is sweet and sad and just amazing. Can I put in another vote for more?

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realpestilence June 29 2011, 01:26:51 UTC
I like the gradual change from "tired Dick, beat from work" to "very concerned big brother-mentor Dick, ready to lay out some training whoopass". :D

Of course, Dick would hug Bart. Of course! :D

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ilovedccomics June 30 2011, 00:49:28 UTC
They are both super sweet and adorable. I like it, good job. I got sad when Dick mentioned Jason and Roy but I'm ok. It'd good that he cares.

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a_big_apple June 30 2011, 04:27:55 UTC
Oh god, Bart, baby...this is so completely ADORABLE, Dick should be EVERYBODY'S big bro, he's so good at it!

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