Black Truths

Dec 09, 2009 20:14

Title: Black Truths
Pairing: OnKey
Rating: G
Genre: Angst
Summary: Lies had never been sweeter.
Notes: Sequel to White Lies - I suggest you read that first since you'd only get confused otherwise. And btw, this is angsty as the first one. D;

Key had always been concise at everything he does, even at slicing Jinki's heart to pieces. )

fandom: shinee, pairing: onew/key [onkey], rating: g

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xxqod December 9 2009, 20:31:17 UTC
They only hurt themselves more with those lies T.T
I love the part where Key admits he can't look people in the eye when lying and Jinki still remembers it, and kisses him!
So sweet ^^
<3 ~~

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ayaa_chandesu December 9 2009, 20:37:52 UTC
Thank you reading bb <3

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ayaa_chandesu December 9 2009, 20:38:14 UTC
*for reading >____________>;

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901younha108 December 9 2009, 23:48:23 UTC
this what i'm waiting for..love you..wait gonna read this first..!

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901younha108 December 10 2009, 00:04:09 UTC
you're not satisfied..
this is the best..
and you know..I want another sequel..hahaha..am i too much..?
i just love how you write..it is like I can feel the real emotion of the story..it seems real to me..

more..I almost cried and my heart is breaking..
yesterday I watched super junior miracle and I found out that key is such an honest boy..he doesn't lie..it's funny but that fact fits your story..

LOVE THIS..write more..
(p.s. is it possible if you write me a minkey story..well I don't know but I'm starting to love that pair..they seems to fit..but still onkey is my number one..)

hwaiting..!

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ayaa_chandesu December 10 2009, 00:16:33 UTC
OMG, I just knew you were gonna say you wanted another sequel! Somehow I just knew @__________@

I actually made up the whole 'Honest Key' thing, but it's lovely to know it's actually true, LOL.

About another sequel, I'm not entirely sure what to put on it, wanna give me ideas? :D Why do you do this to me bb? D: Lol joke <3

p.s. Well I've really open to doing other pairings, but I'll have to think about MinKey first :O I'll let you know when I get ideas ;D (unless you have any. LOL)

*hires you as my personal idea-thinker* XDD

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901younha108 December 10 2009, 01:39:46 UTC
oh..really..to be the personal idea thinker..haha..ok..I;ll let you know if I have..haha..

you make me happy..really happy..!

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rikli December 10 2009, 00:04:17 UTC
fail? where? where's any fail? the last part was awwww~ sweet <3
but still so not finished! XD wanna even more ~.~

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ayaa_chandesu December 10 2009, 00:17:57 UTC
My oneshot turned into a chaptered story @______________@

Thank you bb, for saying it's not fail. But another sequel? D:

I need ideas ;________;

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rikli December 10 2009, 17:41:52 UTC
oh, no need to write a sequel, but another onkey... ok, ok, everybody want a sequel, we know it XD me too ;3
but do not hurry if you ran out of ideas... take ur time and come back with another one like this <3 ^^
[i do not really know what im writing right now, but, yeah, just write something sometime XD]

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ayaa_chandesu December 10 2009, 23:09:00 UTC
At the moment I'm still gathering ideas, but I do have some already :D
I also have about 4 unfinished OnKey fics that I have yet to continue >___>;
But dun worry bb, I'll get the second sequel done soon (i hope) xD

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hanny_b December 10 2009, 02:10:27 UTC
now..that's more like it!! Thank you..it's so beautifully written..love it..!!!yayay!!! Onkey together forever!

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ayaa_chandesu December 10 2009, 11:47:35 UTC
Really glad you liked it, thank you for reading! <3

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saikocchi December 10 2009, 06:08:06 UTC
ACHMEINGOTT!!! AYAAA~~~YOU MADE A SEQUEL~~~ /(>ω<)/♥

andohmythisissogood ;__;

hurts at first but then it's the NOT FAIL happy ending ^-^ onew remembering key couldn't look into ppl's eyes when he's lying is ♥♥♥

ohmai if you're not satisfied with this...then maybe...like younha said, you can make another sequel?? XD but yeah...you're not fail and im not juss saying this to be nice...you really are not :D

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ayaa_chandesu December 10 2009, 11:50:14 UTC
Yes, I made a fail sequel which was 5 days late T____T And I'm really not satisfied with it, I feel like it could've been a lot better. :(

i'mgladyouthinkit'sgoodthough ;____;

I'm really open to another sequel (or should I call it Chapter 3 LOL) but at the moment I don't know what to write about D:

Thank you for saying I'm not fail *90 degree bow* ;______;

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