Black Truths

Dec 09, 2009 20:14

Title: Black Truths
Pairing: OnKey
Rating: G
Genre: Angst
Summary: Lies had never been sweeter.
Notes: Sequel to White Lies - I suggest you read that first since you'd only get confused otherwise. And btw, this is angsty as the first one. D;

Key had always been concise at everything he does, even at slicing Jinki's heart to pieces. )

fandom: shinee, pairing: onew/key [onkey], rating: g

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saikocchi December 10 2009, 06:09:15 UTC
oh!and also

white lies::black truths

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saikocchi December 10 2009, 06:18:42 UTC
oh one more!!soree ><

"Who's the best singer in SHINee? Jonghyun." He wanted to say he was a good singer too. He was tired of people saying he was just the clumsy leader who had a Sangtae.
so sad ;A;

Then Taeyeon laughed, saying it felt nice, but felt like kissing her brother. Jinki wholeheartedly agreed.
haha cute taeyeon and i wholeheartedly agree as well lol they're like two adorkable siblings with very little age difference wtf?lol

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ayaa_chandesu December 10 2009, 11:52:59 UTC
I had to put that in there somewhere since they always say Jonghyun's the only good singer :( I always preferred Onew though :|

Yes, he and Taeyeon can be twins, they'd be so adorable together <33

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saikocchi December 10 2009, 14:20:15 UTC
i prefer onew too D: he needs more love X(

and yay onyeon twins!!! WTF?!OnYeon=Onion?!!! LOL i'm retarded XD

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animefan961 December 10 2009, 07:53:08 UTC
YAY! They know now :D And I don't see the fail, but then again people are tougher on themselves when it comes to things they create.

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ayaa_chandesu December 10 2009, 11:55:19 UTC
Yay, thank you for reading <3

I mostly think it's fail because I think I could have written it better, I had a lot of ideas for it but didn't know how to fit them all properly D:

I'm glad you don't think it's fail though, thank you bb ;____;

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mankadi December 10 2009, 12:28:37 UTC
For some reason i can really understand the feelings in you fic..
It was amazing!!
& Sweet how Onew remembered that key cant look in ppl eyes when hes lying well im like that

Can u make anoter sequel for tthiss?? *puppy eyes*
plzz!!

<33333

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ayaa_chandesu December 10 2009, 12:43:58 UTC
Thank you for reading bb <3

Well I've probably mentioned it on the comments above, but yes, I'm open to another sequel/chapter 3 but in terms of ideas, I'm completely blank >____<;

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mankadi December 10 2009, 14:38:43 UTC
Ohh... sorry D:

hahah yeahh i cant wait.. XD

and im sure u will do great in next chapter..
take it slowly bb <333

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ayaa_chandesu December 10 2009, 15:21:22 UTC
Nuuu don't be sorry bb <3

I'll see what I can do, I have homework to do first >__<;

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ayaa_chandesu January 8 2010, 12:51:54 UTC
LOL it does tend to have that effect on people XD

Dun worry darling <3 Thanks for taking the time to read and comment :D

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fandkz_ot3 January 11 2010, 03:10:23 UTC
aish i feel mean now T_T.
i loved white lies. but i sorta don't like how it ended. being happy, even sorta happy.

=/

still describing onew was great. it feels very full of emotion.

i feel like a sadist now.

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ayaa_chandesu January 11 2010, 03:15:03 UTC
White Lies was supposed to be a oneshot, it was supposed to end that way.
Being completely honest, I didn't want to make a sequel either, but I thought I'd make the effort to make a happy sequel since quite a few people did request it.
Don't worry, you're not a sadist, I know exactly how you feel. xD

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jinkibumiminho December 6 2010, 09:01:17 UTC
I love the plot twist on this. I agree that the ending is a bit abrupt, but so what. We love a happy ending!

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