I love how concerned Gabe is for his daughter but maybe going to their family doctor would be more appropriate then going to the hospital. But then again, Chloe would never have met up with Martha if that had happened.
Can't wait to see how Martha reacts to Chloe--I bet she goes into uber-Mom mode :)
"I love that you are continuing this awesome fic!"
Good to get back to it, I must admit! :-)
"...maybe going to their family doctor would be more appropriate then going to the hospital."
*sheepish* I don't know how the American healthcare system works. Besides, I've never in 10 years seen a family doctor anywhere near any of them before, they just all roll on down to SMC. So I decided to follow that route! :-P
"But then again, Chloe would never have met up with Martha if that had happened."
Ah yes, there is that. :-D
Thanks for the comments, Kathy! So glad you like it. ;-)
I love this fic, so glad you are working on it again. This chapter of discovery on Chloe's part was great. Pete looks like he might just find out with reasonable deduction what has been going on. Or draw the wrong conclusions and force the issue with Chloe. Can't wait to find out. Mrs. Kent (poor lady) will she be able to speak with Chloe? Hope to find out in the next couple of chapters if Chloe and the Kents are going to be okay (with each other). Love it!
"I love this fic, so glad you are working on it again. This chapter of discovery on Chloe's part was great."
Glad you liked it!
"Pete looks like he might just find out with reasonable deduction what has been going on. Or draw the wrong conclusions and force the issue with Chloe."
Hmm...about half of that statement is right, but I won't tell you which half! ;-)
"Can't wait to find out. Mrs. Kent (poor lady) will she be able to speak with Chloe? Hope to find out in the next couple of chapters if Chloe and the Kents are going to be okay (with each other)."
We'll see. Hopefully they'll be sensitive to Chloe's needs, and not default into 'Defend Clark' mode. Because that will drive her MAD.
Glad you like it, hun! I'll try and update again sometime next week. (time permitting!)
After reading this chapter, I went and read the whole fic. So intense but if this story had happened in SV S3, I can totally see it playing out how you've written it. Great job.
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I love how concerned Gabe is for his daughter but maybe going to their family doctor would be more appropriate then going to the hospital. But then again, Chloe would never have met up with Martha if that had happened.
Can't wait to see how Martha reacts to Chloe--I bet she goes into uber-Mom mode :)
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Good to get back to it, I must admit! :-)
"...maybe going to their family doctor would be more appropriate then going to the hospital."
*sheepish* I don't know how the American healthcare system works. Besides, I've never in 10 years seen a family doctor anywhere near any of them before, they just all roll on down to SMC. So I decided to follow that route! :-P
"But then again, Chloe would never have met up with Martha if that had happened."
Ah yes, there is that. :-D
Thanks for the comments, Kathy! So glad you like it. ;-)
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Glad you liked it!
"Pete looks like he might just find out with reasonable deduction what has been going on. Or draw the wrong conclusions and force the issue with Chloe."
Hmm...about half of that statement is right, but I won't tell you which half! ;-)
"Can't wait to find out. Mrs. Kent (poor lady) will she be able to speak with Chloe? Hope to find out in the next couple of chapters if Chloe and the Kents are going to be okay (with each other)."
We'll see. Hopefully they'll be sensitive to Chloe's needs, and not default into 'Defend Clark' mode. Because that will drive her MAD.
Glad you like it, hun! I'll try and update again sometime next week. (time permitting!)
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I can't wait to see what happens with Martha and the nurse!!! yikes!
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Aw, thanks babes! Glad you like it. :-)
"I can't wait to see what happens with Martha and the nurse!!! yikes!"
I'll try not to put Chloe through any more torture than she's already been through! :-P
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Yay, another reader! *smishy-hugs you and offers you cookies*
You're very welcome, hun. So glad you like the story - even though it's a hard one to like!
"So intense but if this story had happened in SV S3, I can totally see it playing out how you've written it."
*melts* That is such an honour. Thank you so much, brisbanite! :-)
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