and doesn't the number six sound a lot like...? ;*
Oh my, everyone has been so patient. I take such a long time to hit my "peak," if you will, so I apologize for the delay!
SHIN MEGAMI TENSEI: PERSONA 4 KINK MEME
PART SIXAs all you charming little anonymous know, in this very post of mine, you can comment anonymously with any pairing from Persona 4 and whatever astoundingly perverse or adorably ( Read more... )
SHIN MEGAMI TENSEI: PERSONA 4 KINK MEME
PART SIXAs all you charming little anonymous know, in this very post of mine, you can comment anonymously with any pairing from Persona 4 and whatever astoundingly perverse or adorably ( Read more... )
Souji in Yosuke's culture festival uniform, topped hard.
NOW YOU HAVE NO EXCUSE.
(...you don't actually have to, but I know I'm not the only one who's dying to see you take that on. xD Just in case having an excuse to write it would make you feel validated in giving it any more thought, I suppose~)
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Yosuke scrambled to obey, hastily wiping his messy fingers off on his thigh before grabbing the lube, fighting to snap the cap open with still slippery fingers and then squeezing out a big blob, far too much, on his cock, swearing at the mess and wiping at it until Souji swiped the bottle from him and threw it on the floor and slapped away his hand from his groin.
“Doesn’t matter.” With a quick move Souji gathered some of the gel and ran his hand up and down the shaft before he grabbed the base, shuffled forwards and sank down.
He didn’t bother pausing until the head had breached him and he had to stop, hissing between his teeth and squeezing his eyes shut, the sudden stretch sending a pang of pain straight up his spine. So he’d failed rather spectacularly to go slow after all. Oh well, he figured, just as long as he held perfectly still for a moment things would be fine. Yosuke, when Souji looked up, looked like he’d ( ... )
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I love the bit with Yosuke's worry/discomfort at the thought of Souji having been with someone else and that he might suck at this and Souji having to reassure him. It's a nice realistic response to Souji's ease with the condom and good bit of characterization in the midst of all the hotness, as was the part about Souji thinking 'maybe schoolgirl = Yosuke still wants boobs *worry fret*'. Not that I'm complaining about the hotness because that too is more than awesome (Yosuke being fascinated by fingering Souji and Souji just sinking down like that? hotAs a general compliment, not only for this story but for the other fills you've done*, you write some very, very good porn and it's very, very enjoyable to read. There's something kind of visceral about it (thank you, dictionary.com, for help me figure out the word I was thinking of), a sort of weight that sticks in the head, if that makes any kind of sense at all. In addition to ( ... )
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Dude, if my stuff can inspire someone enough to give some porn of their own a go I could not be happier. It's like...there's actually a point to writing all this smut, besides the point in the, uh, smut itself, if that makes any sense.
Second, thank you so fucking much, anon. Your comment warms me to the point of sweating and I am so grateful for you taking the time to point out things you enjoyed and telling me what you like about my writing. It means the world to me.
Visceral is a great, great compliment. The weight does make sense and it sort of ties into how it actually feels writing it too. It's a bit of a visceral process. I bet that doesn't make much sense though. 8D
I felt it was time to take a tiny, tiny step away from the pure PWP for a moment and dig into their heads at least a little and I'm very happy to hear it paid off. Thank you.
Just...thank you.&hearts
Indeed, ( ... )
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I'm pleased this comment made you so happy; hearing that made me feel like I'd gotten one on a story of my own so you're very welcome. ♥
I'm guessing you've done that Adachi molests Souji fill (since the writer!anon mentioned a love of dirty talk), Play House and Goal in Sight (since the same person wrote those), and the Souji/Yosuke D/s fill (beacuse the descptive style seems similar)? I might be wrong, and if so I have my embarrassment already prepared, but it can't hurt to ask since you're willing to answer. Plus, I always think it's neat to find out what else someone wrote. It gives you that feeling of 'oh, you did that too? awesome!' or 'oh, well now that it's been pointed out it's so obivous, duh, self.'
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&hearts&hearts&hearts
Ahaha you pretty much nailed them all, yes yes. Awesome. I've done a couple of tinyfills too but they're really not worth mentioning. Aw, man, I feel all flattered you got 'em all. 8D
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<3
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I hope this isn't defeating the purpose of the meme too badly, but -- could I maybe have the link to the Adachi molests Souji fill and the S/Y D/s fill? I love Play House, and I think I missed those two.
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Pretty Little Thing: http://badbadbathhouse.livejournal.com/1990.html?thread=11795910#t11795910
Adachi molests Souji everytime he stays for dinner at Dojima's house
Souji/Yosuke D/s: http://badbadbathhouse.livejournal.com/1990.html?thread=11634886#t11634886
Souji and Yosuke in a D/s relationship
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