Nothing to fear

[beldarzfixon]

Thomas had looked forward to his first Halloween in Edgarton

Comments

[reckless_blues]

This story felt kind of lonely. :{

[missbinary]

The story is intense and the fear is very well described. I really enjoyed this!

[jem0000000]

Aw, poor dude. It sounds as if the house itself is the ghost, and it has no intention of letting him know it's anything but a house. :)

[ryl]

You did a great job capturing the creepiness of a haunted house. There's one house in my town I will never go near again because it's just like this.

[shimmerdream]

This was a great story, I loved the way a house that wasn't haunted was creepier than those that were haunted.