We're words without a rhyme

[beldarzfixon]

The storm rages,

Without, within.

Lightning sends electrons free.

Here we stand, still bound.

Destruction's patterns the hand repairs,

Not the glasswork soul, cracked and soon undone.

Promises pulse deceptive energy,

Potential uncontained.

Rain can dry, wind sheltered.

Yet words light a fuse, igniting hope.

Watch

Comments

[tonithegreat]

Nice! I think this prompt was a good one for poetry.

[simplyn2deep]

This prompt works well with poetry. great job.

[stellinasusan]

Vivid imagery in this piece,very effective meter and interesting theme,enjoyed reading this,thanks and good luck x

[beldarzfixon]

Thanks!
You too

[d0gs]

I love the imagery in this and how melodic it is <3

[ryl]

I'm glad I wasn't the only person who thought of "Rainbow in the Dark" with this prompt. :) I love your interpretation of both.