Pairing: layhan
Rating: pg-13
Word Count: 10,149 words
Summay: It's two years since Yixing met Lu Han for the first time. Two years since Lu Han has slipped out of Yixing's life because Yixing isn't a good person and Yixing doesn't deserve good things. When they're forced to interact, though, it's hard for Yixing to think of anything but happy Lu
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Okay first of all, I'm so sorry for the late comment ;w; homework got the best of me.. and yeah.. I'm sooo sorry ;;
Second of all, THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR THE WORK OF ART OH MY GOD. I AM IN TEARS.
The entire flow of the story was just so natural and I was just in awe of the way I could picture everything play out so perfectly. The visuals, the descriptions, the everything. AMAZING.
Daryl.. oh my gosh, I laughed, I smiled, I cried and I bawled.
I just-
"When he gets home, he pulls out his paint supplies and paints the sky using only purple (as he feels the colour is the most accurate description for how he feels about Lu Han (dark and kind of murky, but also bright, alive, pretty))."
This line is so beautiful oh my gosh, the way you used art and colors in this story is so amazing and beautiful and ahh I'm just so emotional right now and I think I'm going to start crying again.. ;;
‘I think I could stay in China forever if I could stay with Yixing.’Are you just wanting me to cry a river here oh my goodness ( ... )
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oh god don't cry!!! and it is soooo far from a work of art oh god. i am sooo glad that you were able to visualize it. descriptions are my biggest weakness so you saying that really means a lot.
nooooo don't cryyyy. ;;
i'm glad you liked the use of art and stuff. i love art and i really liked the idea of yixing being a painter and using that as tool to both express and hide his feelings.
NO I DO NOT WANT YOU TO CRY OH GOD AHHH
i am really just so grateful that you liked this. i'm honestly surprised as i was sure it was very messy and didn't make much sense or was just really lame and gross and stuff. i am really, realllyyyy so glad that you liked it, baby. i really don't think i did a good job with your precious otp, but i am really glad you think otherwise. you're the best.
i love you lots <3
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/calms down
I just love whenever you talk about painting and all those different emotions happening while he's painting. Art is a very symbolic thing and you incorporated a lot of that beautifully in this fic.
Also, "What's this one called?"
"Regret."
THAT JUST KILLED ME.
Thank you so much for sharing this amazing 10k fic I'm so happy to have read this c:
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thank you!! i'm really glad you think i did a good job with that. art really means a lot to me and so i'm glad i was able to portray that whole aspect well.
ahhhh. that part ;;
noo don't thank me!! thank you for reading, honestly. you are the greatest <3
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i love the idea of the story? and how layhan's relationship worked, and how lay, xiumin, and luhan were all connected
&&& how they just kind of fell together at the end? it was simple and sweet and not overly specific! it's like an open ending that tilts you in the right direction or something
I really like it~
so thank you so much for writing it!!
:D more ppl need to write good layhan like this~ it's my OTP but the lack of fics makes it so tiresome hehe
<3
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and thank you again. i'm glad the relationships were good and the characters, too.
i had thought about being more specific, but i feel like with everything their relationship has gone through, a kind open ending was the best thing for them. thank you again
and ahhh. don't thank me!! thank you for readinggg.
i never super shipped them but i do really like them and i'll definitely have to write some more layhan soon ^^
i do hope more people will write more good layhan for you <3
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And yay for Yifan being the bridge
Poor Minseok...
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but yes~ go yifan for being usefulll haha
i know. ;; at least he had jongdae with him~
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This was really cool story.
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thank you so much!! i'm really glad you think so.
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