The Broken - Chapter Eight - The Secret

[betelin_notecor]

Chapter Eight - The Secret

Comments

[nolagal]

Ok, so I was going to wait and read this after I got stuff done and babysat for a friend but I didn't and I am glad.
I love the world you wove with all of the characters and their various roles.
I feel so bad for snape through this. Very well done, the characterizations were fantastic, I was completely drawn in.

[betelin_notecor]

*hugs* Thanks for reading it, even if it wasn't your kind of pairing!

I hated hurting Snape. He's my fav character, more than the Next Gen kids even. *hugs him* Except, he decided to get fluffy at the end. *kicks him* XD

*hugs you again*

[zephre]

wow, what a beautifully drawn AU. really exceptional. loved the characters and the plot.

[betelin_notecor]

Thank you for reading and commenting! I'm glad you enjoyed it! ♥

[semi_subtle]

Absolutely lovely, start to finish.

[betelin_notecor]

Thank you! ♥

[ilostmynuts]

Lovely! I was worried Snape's hands would be permanently damaged, but you fixed them! :) Too bad about his voice though. :(
I haven't read a good HP fic in a while so this was a real pleasure!

[betelin_notecor]

I couldn't render Snape entirely mute! He'll never have quite the same ability to play as he used to, but it's better than he ever dreamed. =)

Thank you for reading! I'm glad you enjoyed it! ♥

Snape as a musician

[azure_rosa]

Strangely I have only encountered three stories with Snape as a musician. I love the scenario because it fits him so well. Gorgeous story, the emotions came through beautifully. Keep writing, readers are greedy creatures that need feeding!

Re: Snape as a musician

[betelin_notecor]

The musician idea was given to me by the "buyer" of this fic, but I knew it was perfect as soon as I saw it. He just seems like the brooding musician type. =P

I'm glad you liked it! Thank you for reading! ♥