[Fan Fiction] The Way You Aren't {Chapter 1}

[bitter_sweet05]

Title: The Way You Aren't
Pairing: HoMin.  's all I got so far, don't judge.
Rating: PG-13?  IDK.  No sexy times, guys.  Sorry.
Genre: Is angst a genre?  It could be romance, I guess?  Certainly not comedy.
Notes: This is the first fic I have ever written.  Feedback is appreciated, but please be constructive.  I don't care if you're a bitch.  You won't

Comments

[makesmeangry]

SPOT :D

[stinkytoenaty]

lmao . you know Ash ...I never understoon this SPOT thingy :'D
anyway sorry D; I'm about to read it rn :3 and I'm not as fast as Ash

...

and yes I'mma keep call you Ash

[makesmeangry]

ok, so you've already gotten most of my reactions on msn, what with my eye popping off twice and all. but still. XD

i like where this is going. i like how this whole scene unfolds naturally, like i can see it happening right in front of me. (and no, i am NOT in the trashcan. XD)

APPA APPROVES.

[bitter_sweet05]

You are SO a trashcan lurker, I see those coffee stains on your shoulder! D:

*________* You were the first to get to read it all, I'm glad that you like it because omg if my friends hated it, I would have to delete it and pretend it never happened. You make me feel LEGIT, APPA.

APPA SARANGHAEYO!

[ambiguously_jer]

gooosh, I love it. And you know that, and I'll be more coherant and constructive later.

But LULZ, Livejournal is smart. There's a DBSK yesasia.com ad on my page as I'm viewing this.

Creeeeepy.

[bitter_sweet05]

x3 I had you and Ashley reading it at the same time, haha. But adfasdfmasdagert I'm glad you love it cos you makes me happy and warm inside.

...curses. Maybe my adblocker isn't such a good thing. O___O;;

[jacky_snoopy]

Hey. first I want to say that I'm one of the random people that follow you on twitter lol

and second. I really love this so much!
its great ^^
I can't believe this is your first time writing a fancfic!

oh and isn't the part that Changmin says "leave me go, hyung" shouldnt that be let me go, hyung?? :)

[bitter_sweet05]

ahhhh~ which one are you? XD

Omo I'm so glad you like it. I was seriously very apprehensive about writing it and putting it online... I get very antsy about other people reading my stuff, because I'm very critical of my own writing. :3 I've started writing short stories and stuff before, and I tried NaNoWriMo, but I failed epically at it. This is like... my first writing venture where I'm putting it in the public eye so they can make me continue if they likeeeeee it. XD

I think that's actually a regional thing. I've heard and said both where I am (sans the hyung part, of course...). I figured he said "Let go" before, so he wouldn't repeat the same thing over again. XD

[jacky_snoopy]

well my name on twitter is the same one on here so.. :)

ahh i know how you feel. i write stories and stuff sometimes too but i don't dare show anyone xP
well anyways you did good! i would love to read more!

lol oh ok. well it sounded weird to me because i don't here anyone say leave me go where i live xD

[bitter_sweet05]

Eeeeep. *stalks you down on twitter* XD

I'm just very afraid that I'll write stuff and people will be terrible and mean. DX I feaaaaaar that. lol thank you so much for commenting though, and for being so nice. ^_____^

It's kinda awkward phrasing, but I felt it fitting for their situation. lol /sprinkles awk all over everything

[white_rhodesia]

/sobs.

It was beautiful bby <3 write moar.

[bitter_sweet05]

*_______________* Thank you so much. /ego boost

I will definitely, definitely write more. I got into it while writing this chapter, so I hope the next will be just as fulfilling for me...

[stinkytoenaty]

wooo this was really good :o you made a good impression on me, you can write well fosho :'D
and I'm still swept by all those emotions.. the anger and the sadness I'm still sitting with this face :O

I shall keep stalking your fic :3 ........tho I must say I'm more of a Yunjae shipper D; BUT I STILL LOVE IT 8Db you iz good job

[bitter_sweet05]

x3 aaaaaaaaaah! thank you so much. I feel all warm and fuzzy inside that people are actually reading it and like it. I was so scared to post it. XD

It was kinda hard to write... such anger. Especially from Yunho. O_O My brain was like "Yunho anger, DNW" but... well. WELL. It's there, innit. XD

lol I really don't ship any of them, but I've read HoMin fics. They're like... the only fics I've ever read, and it was only a handful. And with the current situation it was easier. :P But THANK YOU. I feel encouraged to write. <333

[stinkytoenaty]

pfffft you deserve it, it's great so FEEL THE LOVU lol :3
& daaaayuuum you better keep writing ;D