Critique, help and suggestions for the character of Elena from Final Fantasy VII go here. If you think I'm going about things the wrong way or if there's things I need to work on, or even if I plain old suck, feel free to let me know at any time ( Read more... )

WIP!

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[Heavy panting]

Urgh...

Found a bunch of monsters by the fountain. Don't worry - they're dead. I made sure of that. I just...

A weak laugh, then a pained groan.

I think...I think I may have overestimated my strength.

There's the sound of a thick liquid dripping on the floor.

Don't...hah...don't bother to lecture me, Sir. You either, Reno. I ( Read more... )

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All right.

Gunshots. At the carnival.

What happened? I need to know, because we can't just have random chaos and people shooting each other all over the place.

I know we can't technically die here but there's always enough danger with all the ghosts and monsters as it is. We don't need to add to it by killing each other.

[Footsteps.]

[mumbling] Brr. Why's it so friggen cold?

[Sudden pause.]

...Hey. What's this? How'd that get here all of a sudden?

--Wha-?!

SON OF A BITCH!

[Heavy gunshots, glass shattering everywhere, then the dry click of an empty magazine clip.]

[Everything is silent except for her heavy breathing.]

Damnit!

Can somebody please explain to me what going on? Because last time I checked, people who die don't just "come back" like nothing has happened. Especially not when they're impaled with bits of furniture. Trust me, I've studied this subject ( Read more... )

Elena's familiar is a fennec fox she named Minerva.

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[[Elena is panting heavily as she tries to catch her breath.]]

Tseng! I saw it! I saw the thing... [gasp...pant]... the thing you saw in your vision! It looked like one of Hojo's experiments, with multiple bodies fused together just like you said!

[gasp...wheeze]

Bullets don't work. At least not this calibre. And it's really hard to sneak up on ( Read more... )

I would very much like to have my brain space back to myself now, please...

Seriously, no more visions. Last night I shot at a raccoon on a garbage can thinking it was something else. Stupid shiny eyes... Sorry if I woke anyone up.

( Locked Message to Tseng: Visible by Turks and Rufus )