SERIOUSLY, ALWAYS YOUNG AND BEAUTIFUL Chapter 13

Oct 08, 2012 09:35

And here we have it! An update! So what do you think about it now?

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rainbow1907 October 8 2012, 16:08:28 UTC
Hey! No turning Brian, as tempting as the thought might be ;))) Just today I was thinking about your story and when you were going to update - thank you for reading my mind!

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brianakinney October 8 2012, 22:10:48 UTC
sorry i dont update as often as my ptr but its the best I can do.

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rainbow1907 October 8 2012, 22:17:33 UTC
Ah, don't worry! I wasn't complaining but more boasting about my psychic talent at predicting your update :)))))

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brianakinney October 8 2012, 23:55:32 UTC
you were right!

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chadmom October 8 2012, 16:18:56 UTC
Wow! Eric is falling for Brian!

And I love the "ever think about always being young and beautiful?" question and Brian's answer of "Everyday" So perfectly Brian!

Great chapter, Randall.

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brianakinney October 8 2012, 22:11:15 UTC
I think he may be. But then, who wouldn;t?

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universal99 October 8 2012, 17:44:41 UTC
Tension was very high in this chapter. Eric being so upset after Russell approached him, I kept fearing he would take a bite out of Brian. Eric constantly showing his vampiric strenght to Brian (especially when you described Brian being carried like Lois Lane). Eric strong emotions highlighted this chapter; his anger at Russell, the door bouncer and ended with his desire to keep Brian around forever (don't know if Brian could handle immortality).

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brianakinney October 8 2012, 22:12:01 UTC
Could anyone? maybe. I dunno what I would think of that.

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scout_harper October 8 2012, 17:53:50 UTC
The more time they spent together,the more the idea of "turning" seems appealing...no,no,Brian,time to return to Pittsburg..
thanks for writing.

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brianakinney October 8 2012, 22:12:29 UTC
They are both entranced right now.

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bksbracelet October 8 2012, 20:19:06 UTC
I was so pleased to see the update I was worried I had missed a chapter as I had been offline for a few days. However no turning Brian please lol Eric said the magic words to Brian " have you ever thought of being young and beautiful forever?" Justin needs to turn up to break this spell these two have going on. Nice chapter Randall thanks Chris.

PS BTW I adore that picture of Brian Kinney it is one of my all time favourites

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brianakinney October 8 2012, 22:13:18 UTC
He does doesnt he? I like the companion shot that goes with that one where he is in profile. But dont like ciggies.

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