FIC : Tie My Hands (11) : Swim Slash : pg15 (Phelps/Lochte)

[caelumi]

Title: Tie My Hands (11/?)
Pair: MP/RL
Rating: pg15 (for mature language)
Summary: Michael Phelps and Ryan Lochte? They were the best worst-kept secret of the swimming world. And Michael didn't like it.
A/N: Starting next week I'll be posting in my new fic-only journal, damningevidence. Please make a note!!

THIS IS A WORK IN PROGRESS

Tie My Hands Part 1 // Part

Comments

[lenaorgana]

The next handful of grass that was ripped up was tossed in Aaron's direction. "Shut up. You're just jealous because my fro is more awesome than your fro."

Both backstrokers do have incredibly “frolicious” hair.

Ryan’s own popularity has shot up after Beijing, but that’s more like girls asking for pictures and stuff. Facebook stalking. Not people expecting the next impossible feat of swimming from him. Not people expecting the next impossible feat of swimming from him.

Uh, yeah. Um, no comment on the first part. But as for the last bit, people so are. :)

“I don’t know if time is gonna make it okay, Aaron. Like, how the fuck is him realizing he treated me like shit an okay reason to take him back? He still treated me like shit.”You always have something in every chapter that rings true to real life. Time doesn’t heal all wounds but it does make things easier, even when friends and/or almost/sort of/yes really boyfriends treat others like hell. Ryan and Michael will get through this…they have to for a “happily ever after” sake.

[caelumi]

I love their hair. Ryan's grows straight up, Aaron's grows out like a Q-tip. ^_^

Facebook stalking? Who?? I don't know what you're talking about.

I was actually suprised that Ryan made that connection on his own, to tell you the truth. I thought someone else would have to make it for him. I guess he's grown up alot in my handsful of chapters.

And oh we so love Ryan for his itty bitty speedos!! I wouldn't want it any other way.

I'll let you in on a secret; I don't think I could write Ryan/Cullen. I just don't see them as more than friends.

And glad you're being optimistic... ~_^ <333

[ivebeenburgled]

I THOUGHT HE DIDN'T GET HIT, YOU BITCH. UGHHHHHHHHH. My poor, poor little heart. You are killing me slowly and the worst thing is that I want moreeee.

God, I can never leave intelligent comments for this story. I apologize for that. I should probably just stop rambling like a retard at your journal.

[caelumi]

MUWHAHA you totally called me a bitch! *dies laughing* Okay, wait, wait, wait. What do you mean you didn't think he got hit? He who? Michael? He's in the hospital in the first chapter!

*petpet* Your rambles make me laugh. <333

[ivebeenburgled]

OKAY YES BUT I TOTALLY DIDN'T REMEMBER THAT. It was so long ago. My brain can only hold so much information at one time (like,currently, it's being overwhelmed by the obscene level of gayness that is Joe Jonas). You must forgive my stupidity.

Well, I'm glad I can do that, at least. You deserve it for this story even if you do make my soul very unhappy.

[caelumi]

I make many souls unhappy, it is a gift that I have.

And buwhaa?? I'm going to have to clean out my ears because I -thought- you just said that you are currently overwhelmed by the gayness of Joe Jonas...

[choklit_latte]

Wow! I always feel like I'm watching "good" reality tv, if there is such a thing, when I read this story. Since I'm more than a little in awe of the beautifully nuanced tapestry you continue to weave with each update, I'll just let Cullen speak the words I think (in a good way) after every chapter...

Holy shit!

[caelumi]

#^_^# Thank you very, very much. <3333 I'm definitely blushing, LOL.

[choklit_latte]

Didn't mean to make you blush (hee!) but this is seriously 'print a copy and curl up in the comfy chair w/a wicked Irish coffee and savor" good. =D

[cataroo]

Cliffhanger, NOOOOOOO!! =)

Seriously, though, great chapter. I like having Ryan's pov after what happened and seeing Aaron step in (I love Piersol!) and help him out.

And the ending, gah!

[caelumi]

Always a cliffhanger!!! ^___^ I love Piersol too; I can't resist putting him in whenever I can, lol. Lochte, Piersol, Grevers, Thoman... I think I might have a thing for backstrokers. <3

[swimboys]

oh please don't keep us waiting too long!??! I know you have a life but this is seriously so good!! In fact, I need to go to sleep so I can do my life stuff! lol Work! terrible when there's so much wonderful slash in the world!!!

I want our boys to have a happy ending but I'm still so mad at Michael(you write well because cuz I'm still mad at him even if he got hit! lol) but I don't know if Ryan should go to him...Michael has to want it..him on his own! Maybe the car knocked some sense into him!

Okay, I need to get a life...one with Ryan and Michael! lol

Thanks as always for sharing!! Big kisses and hugs!!

[caelumi]

<333

Haha, the whole point of the car WAS to knock some sense into him! Otherwise, man. I don't think they would have ever gotten back together if Mike was left to his own devices, seriously. When I started writing I didn't realize that he was going to be such a god-awful jerk about everything. ^^;;