Fic: Butterfly Effect 26/? (Big Wolf On Campus, Tommy/Merton, NC17)

Feb 12, 2006 16:41

More Butterfly Effect.  I still don't know what's going on with this fic, but at least I got them to talk to each other.  That's something.

Chapters 1-25 are here. Chapter 26 is here.

Chapter Twenty-Seven: Truce )

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spoiledjap February 12 2006, 23:50:19 UTC
Dear Tommy and Merton,
I love you both a lot and I'm so glad you're talking again; but both of you have to ease up on the stubborness. Love Ruth

Caroline ::hugs:: Just cause, your you.

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carolinecrane February 14 2006, 21:54:56 UTC
I know, they're both so dense.

::hugs back::

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trevorfrost February 13 2006, 00:07:49 UTC
Yay Butterfly Effect!!!

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carolinecrane February 14 2006, 21:54:36 UTC
Thanks : )

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the_darkglow February 13 2006, 00:54:38 UTC
Wonderful as always. Nice to see the boys getting along and communicating!

/me scolds Merton so he'll stop pushing aside perfectly fine thoughts.

I think Tommy should have a wet dream about Merton. And Merton overhears something he shouldn't. They are teenagers after all, seems appropriate. Doesn't even need to be that dirty, a nice necking dream would do the trick. Can you imagine the internalized freaking out that would ensue for both of them. *eg*

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carolinecrane February 14 2006, 21:54:18 UTC
That is a suggestion which I will take into consideration. Seriously, I need all the help I can get with this fic some days. I don't even know *why* it's so hard to write.

Happy birthday again, btw : )

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the_darkglow February 15 2006, 06:48:26 UTC
It's enormously cliché, but there's a reason a cliché becomes one. Because it works. *g*

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ci5rod February 13 2006, 02:28:16 UTC
Oh yes. Progress. I can see the chinks in the armour already, even if Tommy's being dense. At least he's being dense and friendly, and he'll figure out eventually that it isn't because he's feeling sorry for Merton.

Thanks :-)

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carolinecrane February 14 2006, 21:53:25 UTC
Thank *you* for reading. It stil amazes me that you guys are reading, considering how long writing this thing is taking me.

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carolinecrane February 14 2006, 21:52:41 UTC
Tommy's cutest when he's clueless. I'm trying to shove him in the direction of the clue bus, though. Thanks.

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