Title: Cold Crush Gate [7/7]
Author:
ccgensouGenre: Angst/sap/romance
Rating: PG-13
Band: The GazettE
Pairing: Reita/Ruki
Summary: Reita's cold, unloving facade makes Ruki break up with him, but it seems like no one really wants it to end. So is there any way to break through Reita's shell caused by fear to show his real feelings, and that way mend their
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You really have a talent for suspense and for scene like this ^_^ Very well done! *tumbs up* =)
If you ever write in the future, I look forward to it! ^_^
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Yay! I'm happy you're planning to write more! =D And if you ever want a beta-reader, I'd be happy to do it =)
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This chapter made me cry. It was incredibly well written and I just got so into it that when my mum called me downstairs I got quite a shock. XD
But yes, I'm certainly making sure I have links saved to this. I have a feeling I will re-read it a few more times at least. XD
<3 This really made my day when I saw it on my friends page.
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And you're welcome <3
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This piece of fiction is very well-written and it has depth to it. And that's one thing I personally love in any type of literature. Depth. You've made the characters' personalities and minds have layers and succeeded in making them very realistic. And the plot is good, too; it's not only mindless work of imagination, which anyone could come up with. This is quite a long fic, which is great - since I personally love longer pieces of literature - but you haven't stretched it too much. [It can be so frustrating to read the same things repeat from chapter to chapter without any plot-wise evolving in the story.]
No matter how he fought against it, the words spoken went straight to his heart, making it contract painfully as he wanted so much to just surrender to that warm yet distressed embrace, the cold memories slipping away from his view, taking him to shallow water. Because what can a man do when ( ... )
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And I should be thanking you, not the other way around. But you're most welcome nonetheless. ^^
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Hands down, this is the best fic I have read. Ever.
The ending to this fic was absolutely perfect. The wait was more than worth it. I can honestly say that nearly every time I was on my computer, I'd check your profile to see how far along you were with this chapter [heh >_>].
You're such an amazing writer, keep writing.
Hope your confidence is back up!
-rereads-
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You're welcome ^_^
Also thank you very much for the great fanfiction, and the very sweet comments back :)
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