Cold Crush Gate [7/7]

Feb 02, 2007 16:18

Title: Cold Crush Gate [7/7]
Author: ccgensou
Genre: Angst/sap/romance
Rating: PG-13
Band: The GazettE
Pairing: Reita/Ruki
Summary: Reita's cold, unloving facade makes Ruki break up with him, but it seems like no one really wants it to end. So is there any way to break through Reita's shell caused by fear to show his real feelings, and that way mend their ( Read more... )

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nyanya_nobara February 2 2007, 18:45:03 UTC
I need to go hug someone now! lol I could really feel the emotion connected to this story!
You really have a talent for suspense and for scene like this ^_^ Very well done! *tumbs up* =)
If you ever write in the future, I look forward to it! ^_^

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ccgensou February 3 2007, 05:33:02 UTC
What kind words you say. <3 *shy smile* Thank you, and I will, of course, write more things, so I'm very glad. *blushing*

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nyanya_nobara February 3 2007, 21:04:42 UTC
*hugs* They are well deserved ^_^
Yay! I'm happy you're planning to write more! =D And if you ever want a beta-reader, I'd be happy to do it =)

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ccgensou February 4 2007, 05:00:41 UTC
crimefish is already my beta-reader, but thank you for offering, it is very kind of you. <3 *smiles*

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uncledanzo February 2 2007, 18:59:39 UTC
Ahhh, I don't know what to saaay~

This chapter made me cry. It was incredibly well written and I just got so into it that when my mum called me downstairs I got quite a shock. XD

But yes, I'm certainly making sure I have links saved to this. I have a feeling I will re-read it a few more times at least. XD

<3 This really made my day when I saw it on my friends page.

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ccgensou February 3 2007, 05:34:56 UTC
Awhh, I'm sorry to make you cry? *pats head softly* Thank you for such sweet words, though. <3 *shy smile*

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uncledanzo February 3 2007, 14:43:45 UTC
No,no, it's a good thing it made me cry! ^^ Not many things do, so it shows how well written it was. :]
And you're welcome <3

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anthail February 2 2007, 19:05:45 UTC
Okay, I think I said in some comment in the earlier chapters that this is the best Reituki I've read. I'm going to stick with that decision.
This piece of fiction is very well-written and it has depth to it. And that's one thing I personally love in any type of literature. Depth. You've made the characters' personalities and minds have layers and succeeded in making them very realistic. And the plot is good, too; it's not only mindless work of imagination, which anyone could come up with. This is quite a long fic, which is great - since I personally love longer pieces of literature - but you haven't stretched it too much. [It can be so frustrating to read the same things repeat from chapter to chapter without any plot-wise evolving in the story.]

No matter how he fought against it, the words spoken went straight to his heart, making it contract painfully as he wanted so much to just surrender to that warm yet distressed embrace, the cold memories slipping away from his view, taking him to shallow water. Because what can a man do when ( ... )

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ccgensou February 3 2007, 05:48:19 UTC
Oh. *blinks* Woah. I'm... at a bit of a loss of words, to be honest. You say such kind things that I swear I must be a dark shade of red now. *falls off chair* Thank you, really thank you. <3 *shy smile*

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anthail February 3 2007, 19:10:49 UTC
Um. *smiles weirdly* Somehow I feel honored to make you blush like that just by voicing my opinion. But please, don't fall of the chair just because of that.
And I should be thanking you, not the other way around. But you're most welcome nonetheless. ^^

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orkrist February 2 2007, 19:26:17 UTC
This fic has been such an amazing story about two people and huge misunderstanding. I absolutely love the way you write, how you describe the emotions and small moments, how you touch that little something inside of people. I have to say that I'm wordless, and that's not very usual thing. This is perhaps one of the best fanfics I've ever read, and it will be in future, too. Really, really big thanks to you for this tale. I've been enjoying this so much. Never, ever stop writing. *hugs*

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ccgensou February 3 2007, 06:45:03 UTC
Don't thank me, thank you. <3 Your commens have been very kind, I really do appreciate your support. *shy smile*

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x_nightmare_x February 2 2007, 20:10:06 UTC
Holy crap ♥
Hands down, this is the best fic I have read. Ever.
The ending to this fic was absolutely perfect. The wait was more than worth it. I can honestly say that nearly every time I was on my computer, I'd check your profile to see how far along you were with this chapter [heh >_>].
You're such an amazing writer, keep writing.

Hope your confidence is back up!
-rereads-

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ccgensou February 3 2007, 06:50:33 UTC
Ha? Every time? Awh, you're too sweet. *shy smile* Thank you oh-so-much, really. <3 *blushes*

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x_nightmare_x February 3 2007, 10:43:46 UTC
Heh, yeah :P
You're welcome ^_^
Also thank you very much for the great fanfiction, and the very sweet comments back :)

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