Cold Crush Gate [7/7]

Feb 02, 2007 16:18

Title: Cold Crush Gate [7/7]
Author: ccgensou
Genre: Angst/sap/romance
Rating: PG-13
Band: The GazettE
Pairing: Reita/Ruki
Summary: Reita's cold, unloving facade makes Ruki break up with him, but it seems like no one really wants it to end. So is there any way to break through Reita's shell caused by fear to show his real feelings, and that way mend their ( Read more... )

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ccgensou February 3 2007, 07:04:29 UTC
Hm, I don't know why, but your comment means a lot to me. *blushes* Perhaps because I know you are a good writer. *nervous smile* So thank you, truly thank you, I'm glad to know. <3 *nod*

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decomposition February 2 2007, 21:36:09 UTC
Gosh, honey, this was so beautiful it brought me to tears. I love this pairing so much and you're one of the biggest reasons why. You show the world how beautiful they are through your eyes, and you do it wonderfully. If your confidence drops again, just remember there are us, your readers, who read your stories and become absolutely enthralled and attached, who look forward to every update from you, because we certainly don't think you're a faulty writer.

This was a gorgeous ending. It was definitely packed with a lot of emotions, like Reita and Ruki's hearts were just mapped out in words for us to understand, which can only bring on a tidal wave of feelings. They were so intent to get away from each other yet they just couldn't, they couldn't stay away despite reason, and that desperation tugged at my heart in a wonderful way.

Hands down, this was absolutely lovely. Thank you so much. I'm definitely, definitely looking forward to reading more from you. ♥

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ccgensou February 3 2007, 07:55:43 UTC
Oh. *takes deep breath* Wow, thank you, I don't know what to say, really.
You say such flattering things. Thank you for reading, truly. <3 *shy smile*

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aya_no_kurai February 2 2007, 21:42:54 UTC
ahwwww!!
May I kiss you for this? *shyly*
Thank, thank U!!!! So excellent! *____*

Poor Reita and Ruki... But they finally together, it's the most important.
You have done the fantastic work! And *ashamed to say* I suppose you are my favourite writer ^^
I'll wait for new fics~

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ccgensou February 3 2007, 07:57:35 UTC
*blushes* Kiss me? Awh. *smiles* You're very sweet, thank you for such a kind comment. <3 *nod*

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yukari_sama February 2 2007, 22:50:14 UTC
ayyyyyyy~ I'm going to miss the drama and angst now that this story is finished ^^;
I honestly thought that this wouldn't end happily because they seemed too hurt, but I'm glad everything was resolved. The second person narrative was a bit confusing for me at first because I wasn't sure if it was Reita or Ruki's POV. Despite my slowness with Reita's thoughts at first, I think the way you wrote this, especially near the end, was perfect. Reita's emotions couldn't have been conveyed as raw/real if you wrote it differently. Your words just captured human emotion/vulnerability flawlessly and made the characters AND me feel alive.

The simplest way to describe this is beautiful.
keep it up~ :)

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ccgensou February 3 2007, 08:25:27 UTC
It was inevitable for it to not be at least a little confusing with the new narrative, at first. *nods* So I am not surprised, though I'm really glad that you think it worked out nicely in the end. *blushes* And thank you so much for such kind words, truly. <3 *shy smile*

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rubyarsenic February 2 2007, 23:09:21 UTC
Honestly? What I think? What did I think when I saw that the last chapter of Cold Crush Gate was up, the catalyst of my growing love for ReitaxRuki? What did I think when I was reading the chapter with trembling hands as the vivid imagery painted with mere pixels left me breathless and near screams? What did I think when I thought that Reita was going to leave Ruki, even though you might not have been trying to insert that thought into our heads? What did I think when I realised that all might work out in the end, that all might be okay if they worked a little ( ... )

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ccgensou February 3 2007, 09:59:24 UTC
*wordless* . . .
You - It's, I mean - Oh dear. *nervous laugh* I don't know what to say. I'm trying to grasp for words to express what I feel, but I think I'm failing. Thank you so very much. <3 Really, you're too kind.
Ahh, and about that... It was coincidence, actually. *scratches head* I thought about changing the title in the beginning, but then decided to leave it be. *laughs at self*

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rubyarsenic February 3 2007, 10:44:35 UTC
Haha~! Sorry for overwhelming you a little. >< It's just...so GOOD! It's a little funny because I think expressing emotions through your characters in a fanfiction is one of your strongest points, but whatever. Eheh, hardly. Just never leave the world of literature and I shall be happy. <3

Really? Haha, it's fitting. Cold Crush Gate is your longest and (I don't know if this is accurate but it sort of feels that way...?) most popular fanfiction, so... I'm glad you didn't change it though. Cold Crush Gate just sort of rolls off the tongue. Cooold Cru-SHUH GaTE. Very fun to say. C:

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ccgensou February 3 2007, 14:22:29 UTC
Hm, yes. For me it has always been easier to write about other people's feelings, than my own. *shrug* Though I have been told, I always put something of myself into a story. *thinks*

*smiles* You're weird. *pokes fondly*

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