Title: Cold Crush Gate [7/7]
Author:
ccgensouGenre: Angst/sap/romance
Rating: PG-13
Band: The GazettE
Pairing: Reita/Ruki
Summary: Reita's cold, unloving facade makes Ruki break up with him, but it seems like no one really wants it to end. So is there any way to break through Reita's shell caused by fear to show his real feelings, and that way mend their
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This was a gorgeous ending. It was definitely packed with a lot of emotions, like Reita and Ruki's hearts were just mapped out in words for us to understand, which can only bring on a tidal wave of feelings. They were so intent to get away from each other yet they just couldn't, they couldn't stay away despite reason, and that desperation tugged at my heart in a wonderful way.
Hands down, this was absolutely lovely. Thank you so much. I'm definitely, definitely looking forward to reading more from you. ♥
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You say such flattering things. Thank you for reading, truly. <3 *shy smile*
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May I kiss you for this? *shyly*
Thank, thank U!!!! So excellent! *____*
Poor Reita and Ruki... But they finally together, it's the most important.
You have done the fantastic work! And *ashamed to say* I suppose you are my favourite writer ^^
I'll wait for new fics~
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I honestly thought that this wouldn't end happily because they seemed too hurt, but I'm glad everything was resolved. The second person narrative was a bit confusing for me at first because I wasn't sure if it was Reita or Ruki's POV. Despite my slowness with Reita's thoughts at first, I think the way you wrote this, especially near the end, was perfect. Reita's emotions couldn't have been conveyed as raw/real if you wrote it differently. Your words just captured human emotion/vulnerability flawlessly and made the characters AND me feel alive.
The simplest way to describe this is beautiful.
keep it up~ :)
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You - It's, I mean - Oh dear. *nervous laugh* I don't know what to say. I'm trying to grasp for words to express what I feel, but I think I'm failing. Thank you so very much. <3 Really, you're too kind.
Ahh, and about that... It was coincidence, actually. *scratches head* I thought about changing the title in the beginning, but then decided to leave it be. *laughs at self*
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Really? Haha, it's fitting. Cold Crush Gate is your longest and (I don't know if this is accurate but it sort of feels that way...?) most popular fanfiction, so... I'm glad you didn't change it though. Cold Crush Gate just sort of rolls off the tongue. Cooold Cru-SHUH GaTE. Very fun to say. C:
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*smiles* You're weird. *pokes fondly*
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