Title: Cold Crush Gate [7/7]
Author:
ccgensouGenre: Angst/sap/romance
Rating: PG-13
Band: The GazettE
Pairing: Reita/Ruki
Summary: Reita's cold, unloving facade makes Ruki break up with him, but it seems like no one really wants it to end. So is there any way to break through Reita's shell caused by fear to show his real feelings, and that way mend their
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I started reading this from the beginning several hours ago, and am so glad i stayed up to read it.
This story touched me a lot and was possibly one of the most beautiful fics i have ever read. I loved the way that you worded everything, it was all so poetic, which just made it even more beautiful. You characterised them both so well and just...wow, i am pretty much lost for words.
Thank you so much for writing this, it's wonderful. Keep up the good work ^^
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Give me back my tears!XDDDDDDDD
ok..let's be serious*v*
Well what i can say is...
this is the BEST ReiRuki fic I've ever read!
The words you used are so...so beautiful
and yeah, i really like this kind of bittersweet fanfic.
You are a good writer!So please write more!XD
P.S. Sorry for my crappy English>______
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And don't worry about your English, it is fine. *smiles*
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Thank you so very much for writing this. ♥
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I'd have to say, you are one of the best writers i know of in the jrock fanfic genre. How should I put this? Your writing is on a descriptive side, filled with a lot of figurtive/analogy and that's a good thing, 'cuz not many writers can do it well (like me, i suck at it). While some can do it to the point that it totally slows down the story and bore the reader. However, you did it exquisitely.
On the other hand, since you asked for honesty, your style of writing, in the emotional standards for your charcters, are much suited for female charcters. Which isn't a bad thing per se, it's just that I've never seen or known any guys who cried as much as your male charcters do.
And, want to get something cleared up: The second-person narrative, was it Reita's POV of himself?
Overall, the finale was amazing. It was gushing with emotion. If it was a lemon, you could of squeezed it and make like a gallon on lemonade << that sounds weird, dosen't it ( ... )
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Ah, yes. *nod* It was Reita's POV of himself... just like in the prologue. *sweatdrop*
Thank you for such a kind comment. <3 ... No, actually, thank you for all the kind comments you've given me. I have really appreciated your support very much. *blushes much*
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