Comments | celtic_flicka: VM Fic: Payback (Mac, Natalie Mackenzie, Veronica) PG

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VM Fic: Payback (Mac, Natalie Mackenzie, Veronica) PG

Nov 11, 2009 06:27

Title: Payback

Characters: Mac, Natalie Mackenzie (Mac’s mom), Veronica
Word Count: ~1,700
Rating: PG
Summary: Mac decides to dish out a little payback.
Spoilers: Takes place a few weeks after the end of season 3.
Disclaimer: If Rob Thomas lets me borrow them, they will be returned in their current pristine condition.

Notes: This was written for the ( Read more... )

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Comments 25

p2880 November 11 2009, 19:56:43 UTC

Great look into the mind and heart of Cindy MacKenzie!

celtic_flicka November 12 2009, 14:08:18 UTC

Thanks! I love her.

afrocurl November 12 2009, 01:43:11 UTC

Oh, Mac. I really like this look at the ways in which Mac has incorporated some of V's habits.

celtic_flicka November 12 2009, 14:11:05 UTC

V gets flack sometimes for "using" her friends, which I think she did occasionally, but I think she was also good for both Wallace and Mac, who clearly "admired her moxie" and got bolder as a result.

spygrrl76 November 12 2009, 05:17:36 UTC

That was great! You did a fantastic job of capturing Mac's "voice" and portraying her believably. I could see her taking that action against Vinnie. Her thoughts about Veronica and their relationship felt authentic too. The last line was perfect! :)

celtic_flicka November 12 2009, 14:24:48 UTC

Thank you! I love writing dialogue for Mac. I try to incorporate her into my fics as much as I can, even if it's just for a line or two.

serendipityxxi November 12 2009, 07:15:03 UTC

Heeeeeee! Oh I loved this! I love your insight into Mac's head and I love that you wrote Mac!fic (there's not enough out there!) and I love that this fixes Keith losing the election! and I love that last line! LOL!

celtic_flicka November 12 2009, 14:29:57 UTC

I agree--I love Mac!fic, and I try to put her in most of my VM fics. I even wrote one that takes place in s3 but from Mac's POV (with her and Logan working on the website)--it was supposed to be a quick little story but it grew! I had a hard time not letting that happen this time too. :)

sanya4 November 13 2009, 13:04:15 UTC

This was lovely! I always enjoy seeing Mac in your fics. :)

It was nice to read about Liam (and Vinnie) finally getting caught by the hand of justice. And like everyone else, I too loved the last line. :)

celtic_flicka November 13 2009, 15:55:59 UTC

Thanks! I liked the idea of Mac taking them down (with Max's help), because she has a greater sense of self-preservation than V--she wouldn't do anything that would get her or her friends hurt.