Feature I did not receive much feedback from my editors, inside and outside of our class, so I can only assume I did well and did not change too much. I loved writing this one, it is my favorite. It was easy to write about a fun, exciting adventure I had while trying to “sell” it to other people. I am a little unsure though of whether it is a real ( Read more... )

DescriptiveBeing a person with a lot of emotional feelings but has a really hard time expressing and describing them in words made this essay especially difficult for me. Venice, as a first impression was a rollercoaster of emotion for me and I hope I was able to get that somewhat into my essay. My aunt had just passed away suddenly the week of ( Read more... )

Review I had a lot of really good feed back on this essay and I think it made over confident about it. I expected a better mark but in the end I wasn’t so deserving. I really liked this kind of writing and the “research” (sitting back watching a film) is my kind of homework! Although I felt I was giving too much of the movie away, I learned that ( Read more... )

Analysis I am not at all happy with this one. I wish I had time to rewrite on another topic, which obviously I don’t. This is a poor result of being pressured for time and not putting any thought into writing something interesting and original. I do feel very strongly about the topic of abortion and with my best friend was going through a “keep it ( Read more... )

PersuasionWow this essay needed a ton more work, even after I submitted it for marking (so embarrassed). One thing I learned with all of these essays is my grammar skills are awful and I should go back to grade 11! Not lots of helpful feed back from editors, but I understand sometimes when an essay is such a mess it’s hard to know where to start ( Read more... )

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I always count on the explorations to help clarify our assignments but this time I must say I was a little disappointed. I am a little iffy as to what I ended up with is under the correct guidelines. Although perhaps that only because a feature can be anything with no strict guidelines? which is nice but atleast with strict guidelines you know ( Read more... )

I have fallen behind on commenting on the expolorations..oops.. does anyone else feel like atleast 75% of the work they do is for this course? I have always struggled with writting and although this course takes up most of my precious time =), I think (with some hope) that it has improved my writting skills ...I can actually say I enjoyed writting ( Read more... )

“Water Incorporated ( Read more... )