Comfort

[childishgrin]

Title: Comfort
Author: Viv
Genre: angst
Rating: PG-13
Fandom: Viewfinder [manga]
Pairing: Takaba/Asami, kind of
Disclaimer: If only… *sighs*
Summary: Akihito thoughts while he’s trapped in Hong Kong. [oneshot - Companion: Remembering]

Comments

this is bittersweet

[dyoklako]

i really feel for Aki-chan and Asami-kun. Asami better be recovered enough to go and rescue Aki-chan soonest.

the emphasis on the feelings gives the whole fic more dimension and depth as to the level of anxiety and worry Takaba is suffering. the "not-knowing-when" kind of situation. :)

good job.

Re: this is bittersweet

[offthesidelines]

Thank you. -^.^-

[windyhurrice]

Aaawwwww........... *cries*

Asami should really hurry up healing in hospital and then come to HK, tear down their place and look for his woman Akihito...

And make sure to remove that tattoo from Akihito! >.

[childishgrin]

Tattoo...

*sees another angst fic possibly coming up*

[windyhurrice]

Tattoo...

*sees another angst fic possibly coming up*

Whoops...I did not say that... I have just not said that........

.........*sparkles* XD

[k_a_s_h_k_a]

that was so pretty... short but so powerful... i loved it.
i hope you liked it and will write more for this fandom ^__^

[childishgrin]

I'll try. :D

[belledandyangel]

:) I really the portrait of Asami here that shown his actual first moment of emotional reaction to Aki *squeal* -> and I like the way Aki here admitting he is falling for Asami unconsciouly and unwillingly ... sighss love is hard hihihi

[childishgrin]

^.^

[sasheenka]

Very well written and powerful! I liked it a lot!
and I loved the way you showed us the emotions in Asami-sama's eyes and Aki's feelings...and everything....

but I'm beginning to have an angst over dose....*pokes you*...wtite something fluffy....

[childishgrin]

i originally wanted for my first Viewfinder fic to be a humour one but... well, obviously that went down the drain. I don't think I'm able yet to be able to write about Asami and yet keep in him somewhat in character (I pride myself on being able to do so with all my "characters" whenever I write).

Mmmm... we'll see.

[sasheenka]

Asami is often difficult to keep IC, but I'm sure you'd be able to do it^^

IMHO I very rarely like fics where the characters are OOC...because then there's no point in reading a fafic...

lol, but a bit of humor or fluff never hurts...

[childishgrin]

... We'll see if I can do anything descent with him... *goes off to post companion-fic*