Two Poems i wrote, because i have to

Mar 20, 2006 22:22

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yourheroinfix March 21 2006, 04:11:16 UTC
"Love,
Graced over your heart
Without error,
At the precise moment and accurate place.
Cause your heart to soar into the sky,
Reach up the heaven of your dream.

Love,
Stabbed into your heart
Randomly,
At the improper time and inappropriate location.
Let your heart to break into pieces,
Fall down to the abyss of your nightmare."

I liked that. A lot.

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chinese_stalker March 21 2006, 21:13:23 UTC
Thanks, but i really do hate poetry. As for English, worse subject ever in my opinion

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undakontruktsin March 21 2006, 22:08:41 UTC
Tian,
A chinese character meaning sky,
Is the name Father chose for me.
Hoping my heart is broad and boundless
To accept people with:
Skins of any colors,
Tongues of any langugages,
Hearts of any beliefs.
Tian,
My name,
Is the personality Father hoped for me

Perhaps you meant language? And perhaps you meant to remove the colon (:)? And instead of personality, did you mean character? Chinese? LMFAO. Read between the lines, dude.

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