Cool breeze, warm sun grabbing and lifting My mood.
A view of the waves breaking, seaweed washing up on the sand.
Closing my eyes telling myself never to forget this moment.
The light in my soul, the pretty Senorita laying beside me.

Just a quick introduction since i just joined this community, I'm 19, college student, I've loved to write ever since i could pick up a pencil and I love feedback of any kind since I'm in that long phase of trying to mesh out a voice as a writer. I love poetry but have recently been on quite a prose kick, so humor me ( Read more... )

people brought us flowers
to place them where we lay
but you cannot fill the darkness
of an empty grave

Shook and tore myself away from a bad evil dream.
Looming dark clouds, panthers gorging on my soul.
Spooky skeletons pulling me apart.
Making my bones break , enjoying the sound of my tendons popping.
Woke up drenched in sweat.
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take my hand ( Read more... )

Went to a corner store and purchased a book of matches.
Lit all those sticks up and watched them slowly burn.
Collected the ashes and rubbed them on my palms and hands.
Blown away in the beauty of my black fingernails.

sorry poem but thanks all for comments, good or bad

( Guts )

Truly believe my insides are starting to pollute ( Read more... )

Dressed in the decay of all that was

It lies painted so eloquently across the walls

Dripping with the desire you never did fulfill

From the swollen walls of your false empathy

Dug inside to find it far too full

For the emptiness that had only ever been

Now the walls pound with the sincerity

Of what you never meant

Entrapped another

Blindly ( Read more... )

I'm in somewhat of a slumo with my writing, it all seems like crap to me but I can't figure out how to fix it. That being said, comments are greatly appreciated!

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