Citizen Erased -- Chapter Seven

Aug 12, 2008 13:00

Summary: Disoriented after her transformation into a vampire, Bella struggles with amnesia. As she learns to control her new powers and abilities, she must also come to terms with what she is ... and with the vampire she doesn’t remember marrying. Bella/Edward.

Previous Installments:

Chapter One
Chapter Two
Chapter Three
Chapter Four & Five
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wm_law2003 August 12 2008, 20:38:54 UTC
You have absolutely nothing to apologize for. THis chapter was fan-freaking-tastic. Gah. Just GAH!!

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coquette7 October 27 2008, 20:24:24 UTC
Thanks! I've just posted the next chapter of Citizen Erased. It's posted (here) if you'd like to read it. Sorry for the delay, and thanks for reviewing on Chapter 7!

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edeainfj August 12 2008, 21:11:47 UTC
*laughs* I looked it up, too. Couldn't help myself. Another great chapter, Coquette!

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coquette7 October 27 2008, 20:25:05 UTC
Thanks! I've just posted the next chapter of Citizen Erased. It's posted (here) if you'd like to read it. Sorry for the delay, and thanks for reviewing on Chapter 7!

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sglitzys August 13 2008, 01:20:01 UTC
I found the definition online too :-P I would be surprised if Bella doesn't get into ANY trouble just.

*swoons* when Edward told Bella to come back to bed!!

More smut please! Thanks for the quick update

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4timesaround August 12 2008, 20:45:19 UTC
SWEETNESS OF ALL THAT IT HOLY!

i'm so thrilled that there have been two updates so close to each other.

have i mentioned how much i love this?
yes?
just let me say it again.

this is sooooo fabulous, i luff it so much.

...hey, um, just don't turn into Smeyer with too much cockblockin'... that would be horrifying.

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coquette7 October 27 2008, 20:25:52 UTC
Thanks! I've just posted the next chapter of Citizen Erased. It's posted (here) if you'd like to read it. Sorry for the delay, and thanks for reviewing on Chapter 7!

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kelsyisnothxc August 12 2008, 20:55:04 UTC
haha, that was really good. :D
and lol at cockblocking.

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coquette7 October 27 2008, 20:26:09 UTC
Thanks! I've just posted the next chapter of Citizen Erased. It's posted (here) if you'd like to read it. Sorry for the delay, and thanks for reviewing on Chapter 7!

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scout31 August 12 2008, 20:56:17 UTC
I laughed when Bella threw the journal at Edward's head and i must admit i also love a commanding Edward...good chapter..reading your fic is way better than reading Breaking Dawn

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coquette7 October 27 2008, 20:26:24 UTC
Thanks! I've just posted the next chapter of Citizen Erased. It's posted (here) if you'd like to read it. Sorry for the delay, and thanks for reviewing on Chapter 7!

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