Citizen Erased -- Chapter Seven

Aug 12, 2008 13:00

Summary: Disoriented after her transformation into a vampire, Bella struggles with amnesia. As she learns to control her new powers and abilities, she must also come to terms with what she is ... and with the vampire she doesn’t remember marrying. Bella/Edward.

Previous Installments:

Chapter One
Chapter Two
Chapter Three
Chapter Four & Five
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edward/bella, citizen erased

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miahdrake August 12 2008, 21:17:30 UTC
Wonderful update yet again!
This story is so exciting and this chapter was so sweet, I cannot wait to read more :)

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coquette7 October 27 2008, 20:27:47 UTC
Thanks! I've just posted the next chapter of Citizen Erased. It's posted (here) if you'd like to read it. Sorry for the delay, and thanks for reviewing on Chapter 7!

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OOh!! twilighterfan August 12 2008, 21:18:57 UTC
OOOH!! I loved this :) it was great!!! the kiss was so...sexy lol. I love how edward said bella looked so sad when she was reading the journal, like her heart had been ripped out. really cute :D

cant wait for more! You're the best coquette! *squeels*

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Re: OOh!! coquette7 October 27 2008, 20:32:40 UTC
Thanks! I've just posted the next chapter of Citizen Erased. It's posted (here) if you'd like to read it. Sorry for the delay, and thanks for reviewing on Chapter 7!

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v0lka August 12 2008, 21:24:31 UTC
oh yeah, i love this chapter.....so hot.

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coquette7 October 27 2008, 20:32:56 UTC
Thanks! I've just posted the next chapter of Citizen Erased. It's posted (here) if you'd like to read it. Sorry for the delay, and thanks for reviewing on Chapter 7!

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thistleandfi August 12 2008, 21:26:16 UTC
um please don't apologize for "the lack of plot-driven action" cuz that was full on hot. you capture their connection so well.. can't say that enough :)

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coquette7 October 27 2008, 20:33:22 UTC
Thanks! I've just posted the next chapter of Citizen Erased. It's posted (here) if you'd like to read it. Sorry for the delay, and thanks for reviewing on Chapter 7!

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quakeland August 12 2008, 21:35:04 UTC
brilliant!

OME! i love your fan-fic so much more than breaking dawn. you are spectacular. i feel like you really "get" how edward and bella feel.

keep up the awesome work.

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coquette7 October 27 2008, 20:32:24 UTC
Thanks! I've just posted the next chapter of Citizen Erased. It's posted (here) if you'd like to read it. Sorry for the delay, and thanks for reviewing on Chapter 7!

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