Citizen Erased -- Chapter Seven

Aug 12, 2008 13:00

Summary: Disoriented after her transformation into a vampire, Bella struggles with amnesia. As she learns to control her new powers and abilities, she must also come to terms with what she is ... and with the vampire she doesn’t remember marrying. Bella/Edward.

Previous Installments:

Chapter One
Chapter Two
Chapter Three
Chapter Four & Five
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poeticfrog August 12 2008, 22:10:32 UTC
this chapter is so beautiful! Perfect timing for it too! :) Now I'm off to look up en prise LOL

can't wait for more!!!

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coquette7 October 27 2008, 20:33:47 UTC
Thanks! I've just posted the next chapter of Citizen Erased. It's posted (here) if you'd like to read it. Sorry for the delay, and thanks for reviewing on Chapter 7!

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infinitexfaerie August 12 2008, 22:33:27 UTC
crazy good. love it. i can't express it.

bella would be such a twihard.

these updates so close have deluded me into thinking i'll get another chapter tomorrow. it would be heaven. keep going! =]

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coquette7 October 27 2008, 20:34:03 UTC
Thanks! I've just posted the next chapter of Citizen Erased. It's posted (here) if you'd like to read it. Sorry for the delay, and thanks for reviewing on Chapter 7!

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ultimatecozzie August 12 2008, 22:34:29 UTC
very nice chapter, loved it as usual
you're definitely and expert when it comes to writing scenes like this

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coquette7 October 27 2008, 20:34:18 UTC
Thanks! I've just posted the next chapter of Citizen Erased. It's posted (here) if you'd like to read it. Sorry for the delay, and thanks for reviewing on Chapter 7!

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monstercrush August 12 2008, 22:51:32 UTC
Hee -- I'm so excited to read this later!

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coquette7 October 27 2008, 20:34:32 UTC
Thanks! I've just posted the next chapter of Citizen Erased. It's posted (here) if you'd like to read it. Sorry for the delay, and thanks for reviewing on Chapter 7!

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calm_lips August 12 2008, 22:57:39 UTC
I just love this story. You are such a brilliant writer. I get so excited every time I see that you've updated! :)

This was a lovely chapter -- definitely not a disappointment at all. I loved reading more Edward/Bella, especially the make out part. ;)

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coquette7 October 27 2008, 20:34:50 UTC
Thanks! I've just posted the next chapter of Citizen Erased. It's posted (here) if you'd like to read it. Sorry for the delay, and thanks for reviewing on Chapter 7!

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