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Fic: Post-Mortem part 2

Feb 09, 2007 19:54

Fic: Post-Mortem Part 2: Profiling Jack Harkness
Author: CrabbyLioness
Pairings: Team, Jack/Ianto mentioned, Gwen/Owen mentioned
Summary: In the wake of Jack's disappearance, Owen tries to figure out what to do next.
Rating: R for language. It's Owen, what do you expect?
Disclaimer: Don't own them. Don't even like Owen, but "Quincy" has his ( Read more... )

fic, post-mortem

Comments 67

beccaelizabeth February 10 2007, 07:44:47 UTC

"So you think that's what happened? Jack's got a private health-care insurer who called him up to talk about the latest bill?" Owen asked.

I like this.

Nice way to assemble details and fill in stuff.

crabby_lioness February 11 2007, 17:22:44 UTC

Thank you.

cbglacier February 10 2007, 07:47:06 UTC

good voice, good interactions, I really liked how Ianto referred to himself and Jack's relationship, very matter of fact but maintaining their privacy, makes me adore them all the more
so more please....

crabby_lioness February 11 2007, 17:26:58 UTC

Thank you. Working on it as fast as I can.

mara_202 February 10 2007, 08:08:29 UTC

I really liked this. I usually don't like Owen much, but I really like the way you write him. Please write more. :)

crabby_lioness February 11 2007, 17:34:47 UTC

Thank you. More on the way.

nightporters February 10 2007, 08:10:24 UTC

Where was this when I was needed some information. Nice to see Owen 'in charge' but not being crude all the time. You have to have a bit of crudeness and this was just right.

I loved the description of Ianto's job, and the way he answers the questions ..so far. Well done to Tosh for standing up for Ianto.

Love this so far.

crabby_lioness February 11 2007, 21:07:50 UTC

Thank you. In Owen's own words, he's a twat. There are worse things to be.

Ianto isn't very happy right now. :( But he's not going to turn into a doormat.

nightporters February 11 2007, 21:35:50 UTC

Good to not being a doormat. It's quite hard not to turn him into one.

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crabby_lioness February 11 2007, 21:19:30 UTC

XD This is great! Jack's quarters sound fantastic... *grin*

Thanks, I was just extrapolating on the hints they gave earlier.

The only quibble I have is that the larger, bold text can be a bit tricky to read.

I was trying to make it easier for weak eyes. LJ's "small" is a bit too small IMO.

Some of the excerpts in the next part made me giggle my head off, by the way XD The picking up pretty girls line... yeah XD

That was irresistable. :)