Gracey wrote a story!

Aug 27, 2003 18:42

Always and forever
truth is but a lie
Hold me close and breathe the word
Tomorrow I shall die...
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forever_psycho August 27 2003, 02:48:31 UTC
ummm. I don't get it. So she's a bitch. Then she hits her friend who points out that she's a bitch. Then she's like "I'm sorry" and then its all good.

Not enough violence.

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solemnmachine August 28 2003, 01:02:33 UTC
It all happens too fast, though I like the idea, except for the ending, someone should die.

And Chris is right, still not enough violence.

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crazy_gracey August 28 2003, 01:06:31 UTC
Thats why its a short story and You know I don't believe in violence.

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geckonidae August 28 2003, 01:27:31 UTC
well, i like it, and i dont think it needs to be more violent
whee!
i also like that other one you did a while ago but i didnt comment because i am silly

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crazy_gracey September 1 2003, 01:21:01 UTC
hmm it must be a guy thing..

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