[Fic] It hurts: Part 9

[deeacrazyme]

Part 2
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PART 4
Part 5
Part 6
Part 7
Part 8

Part 9

Comments

[r1k1t0]

It's funny how Ryu would think that Hayato fits better as the top. Hehehes~ And yay! Ryu finally said he loved Hayato! xDD
Wonder what Hayato would say now~ xDD
Thanks for the update! :D

[kame_kiyumi]

yay~ haha! I hope Hayato will say "I like you" too! XD

[wintersdancer]

Ok, I'm going to repeat myself....I really like the way you can mix feelings/emotions/thoughts with action, seriously. I don't know how are you able to do that. Everything feels much more real

HAYARYU I S LOVE

[paoktsou]

This is so hot and beautifull and amazing!!
kyaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa!!! i love this!!
thanks for this double update i'm so exited!!!
keep going girl!!!
I LOVE THIS FIC!!!
chuu!!

[granity20]

the meaning change?really, i did not notice it.thinking back, i guess i never really knew the meaning of "it hurts"....