Say It Out Loud (4/12)

Jun 07, 2012 02:09

Pairing: Liam/Zayn
Word Count: this chapter, 1566
Rating: NC17 as there will be future smut  
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liam payne/zayn malik, liam payne, one direction, fanfic, zayn malik

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anonymous June 7 2012, 07:25:15 UTC
yay, you don't know how excited i was to see you updated!

oh zayn, not feeling that he's good enough for liam and liam not understanding how zayn could possibly feel inadequate because he's perfect to him, and liam is really the one who isn't good enough (which obviously isn't true)

i love the insecurities and awkwardness between them because it's so endearing and natural, especially for two young guys.

this is so perfect <3

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dmoskobitch June 8 2012, 01:00:13 UTC
aw wow thank you so much!!
i have the next part done so I shall post it probably tomorrow because I know this one was a bit short!

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niallerhaz June 7 2012, 21:51:20 UTC
Yay, an update. Short, but sweet. Love it!

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dmoskobitch June 8 2012, 01:01:45 UTC
Sorry it was so short :/
I'm trying to make my chapters longer but I dont know, it seems to work as short ones but I dont want to become annoying so I might start making them longer!
Thank you!

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shoreparty June 8 2012, 03:33:52 UTC
Duh I loved it.
Vulnerable!Zayn is such a...I don't even know if it's called a kink...but anyway that's what I live for.
Gosh I wish I could live in this 'verse :D
I think you're writing this exactly right! The quiet, sincere moments are what make this pairing for me...so it seems really authentic. I heart you. Sorry if this is not making sense I'm a bit off my face on meds right now.
but yes Seona <333 Are you writecodeformebaby by any chance lol?

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dmoskobitch June 8 2012, 03:51:32 UTC
Urgh I know what you mean, vulnerable Zayn in other fics is just...everything good in this world.

omg you are so perfect i cant even respond properly because i am so flattered really thank you urgh urgh urgh

omg yesss i am, whats your url?!

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shoreparty June 8 2012, 21:23:58 UTC
lol lol lol i feel stupid I've been following your blog for like ever.

I'm "reindeer-sweater" and then I made a 1d side blog because I was annoying everybody with my Ziam obsession >_

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dmoskobitch June 9 2012, 13:08:35 UTC
oh gosh i probably didnt follow you because for ages i refused to fall into the one direction fandom but let me just amend that haha! also i love you

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