Orizuru: Epilogue

[docepax]

Comments

[ullman79]

Wow. Am in awe of your Jensen voice - and the gorgeous build up to a surprising but infinitely satisfying ending - but mostly your writing in general. This is just breathtakingly beautiful throughout. Thanks so much for sharing!

[kriari]

Thank you so much! It was my pleasure to share :D

[hils]

♥ ♥ ♥

Yeah, I knew I was going to love this and I did. Loved the slow buildup with Jensen's growing insanity over the whole thing. Didn't guess at all that it was actually a prank!

You write so beautifully honey! I was up until 4:30am finishing this and I didn't even care! You write Jensen and Misha so wonderfully.

I will be reccing this of course :)

[kriari]

:DDD

I was perhaps too subtle with my clues at times, but then the point that was Jensen Does Not Get It, so I suppose it worked :)

Thank you! Hopefully, you've recovered from your sleep deprivation by now?

Ooh, yaye :)

[hils]

Oh, it worked perfectly! I mean obviously I knew it was Misha but I had no idea what Jared's involvement was and that kind of made it more interesting to me :)

[kriari]

:) I wanted to try to bring an element to the mystery that would keep it a bit of a mystery without going full-on into: "It's all Jared's fault!" because that doesn't sit will with me.

Glad it was interesting :)

[gunsrlove]

I absolutely loved this. It's one of those stories that has stayed with me and I keep thinking about. I loved the buildup to their relationship and I could feel every emotion Jensen felt because of your wonderful writing. Someone above mentioned the word "yearning". That's what broke my heart, the yearning that Jensen had for Misha. I was so happy they were together at the end.

[kriari]

I'm so glad you enjoyed it :) I have a tendency to weave that yearning in, even when I don't mean to. I suppose it's because that's the part of "coming together" stories that makes me feel the most - the act of wanting someone when they may not want you back. I would have been a terrible person had I not brought them together in the end! Especially since this was essentially a RomCom.

Thank you for reading :)

[starcrossedgirl]

This was gorgeous and just overflowing with emotion, for all that you kept it subtle and quiet. Absolutely stunning!

[kriari]

Thank you! I'm pleased that you liked it!

[dossier]

I love the extreme tight pov, it's a tool that gets used so rarely, and even more rarely to such stunning effect. gorgeous story, and I could not stop reading it once I started.

[kriari]

Thanks so much! Glad you stuck it out and ended up enjoying it in the end :)