In This Dark Alley || Sherlock (BBC) || PG-13 ||

Mar 29, 2011 20:59

Title: In This Dark Alley
Author: _doodle
Fandom: Sherlock (BBC 2010) FPS
Pairing: Sherlock Holmes / John Watson (Established Relationship)
Rating: PG-13
Word Count: 1200
Beta: alizarin_nyc
Disclaimer: Sherlock belongs to the BBC, Steven Moffat and Mark Gatiss. Sherlock Holmes belongs to Arthur Conan Doyle.
Summary: There have been too many dead bodies since the ( Read more... )

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captcrashsc March 29 2011, 21:34:52 UTC
Oh my. That hurt, but in the best possible way. What a lovely, angsty little ficlet to add to the mems.

His death harms you in ways I cannot fix. It is personal now.

I think that may be my favorite part.

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_doodle March 30 2011, 19:04:46 UTC

Thank you so very much!

I'm glad you liked it, even if it did hurt ;)

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morganstuart March 29 2011, 21:43:57 UTC
for Bill Murray who survived Afghanistan, but not being friends with John Watson

This is wrenching and powerful. Just lovely. It packs quite an emotional punch!

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_doodle March 30 2011, 19:07:32 UTC

Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it, I think it would be impossible for John not to feel responsible and to blame for Bill's death.

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jerel March 29 2011, 22:40:16 UTC
Very emotional piece. Great work.

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_doodle March 30 2011, 19:08:06 UTC

Thank you! ♥

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alizarin_nyc March 29 2011, 23:42:19 UTC
You killed Bill Murray, star of Caddyshack!

This is lovely, dearest. Your range as a writer is growing and blossoming.

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_doodle March 30 2011, 19:26:29 UTC

Your comment on the beta made me laugh, because I had almost the same exchange (hence the warning note) with angelnetgirl in London.

Me: I just killed Bill Murray.
ANG: Er.... why?
Me: Because I needed someone Sherlock doesn't know, but John would be upset about.
ANG: ......
Me: The character that saved John in Afghanistan?
ANG: Oh, LOL! ...... I was wondering why you were killing the actor and why John would be upset about it.
Me: *has hysterics*

I think it's an entirely new thing for me. Writing non-relationship related angst, and in so few words too. Who knew I had it in me, I certainly didn't!


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cee_em March 30 2011, 00:32:58 UTC
Beautiful.

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_doodle March 30 2011, 19:36:33 UTC

Thank you!

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