Five Times Jim Moriarty Kissed John Watson (And One Time John Kissed Back) || Sherlock (BBC) || John

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Title: Five Times Jim Moriarty Kissed John Watson (And One Time John Kissed Back)
Author: _doodle
Fandom: Sherlock (BBC 2010) FPS
Pairing: John Watson/Jim Moriarty, Sherlock Holmes / John Watson
Rating: PG-13
Word Count: 4,600
Beta: alizarin_nyc
Warnings: Non-consensual kissing, spoilers for Scandal in Belgravia.

Summary: Five times Jim Moriarty kissed John

Comments

[luvindigo]

This was just so, so good! I love it so much :D
"The knife was sharp, and slipped into Moriarty’s stomach like it was warm butter."
Not quite sure why, but this made me grin and snicker...this fic is just amazing <3

[_doodle]

Thank you so much, I'm glad you enjoyed it - I wasn't entirely sure how this was going to go down!

♥

[coolcia]

oh, it was wonderful!
However I was really counting for a happy Jim/John end! And I was hopping you would continue it. Hmm, well, still it was great!

[_doodle]

Awww, I'm sorry. I wasn't entirely sure how it was going to end, but when I got there John was just not having any of Moriarty's mindfuckery. If it helps any, I am very tempted (and being encouraged) to write something else, an even darker seduction of John by Jim, which would end up as a proper John/Jim story.

Still, I'm glad you liked it, even though it didn't end up where you wanted it to!

♥

[coolcia]

ooh, so I hope very much that you will write another John/Jim story !
You're doing it very well! :)
And please, long one ! You could give yourself open door and just write short parts like here wich you could added from time to time, when you would had inspiration, haha :) It would be wonderful :D
I apologise for my English, I'm not a native speaker and I had a hard day today.

[_doodle]

Well, I'm officially writing more John/Jim..... I hope this pleases you! I'm actually a lot of fun, and it looks to be just as twisted and dark and angsty, and maybe a bit porny. Not sure how long it will be, but probably at least twice the length of this one.

(And please don't worry about the English, I used to teach it abroad and have come across much, much worse!)

[_doodle]

*Blushes*

Thank you! I don't normally write this dark and twisted, so I wasn't really sure how well it worked, so I'm really flattered to see it called 'brilliance'.

(And the ending, how could I not? John is such a BAMF and would never take mindfuckery from Jim lightly.)

[_doodle]

It's one of the things that I love about this version of canon, that they balance John so well. He's so solid, and steadfast, and responsible compared to Sherlock, but he is also very, very capable of being one hell of a dangerous man when he needs to be. But, only when he needs to be. And I think, if Moriarty put him (and Sherlock) through what he does in this, then given the chance he's going to do what he needs to - and he can square it morally as he's not actually killing Moriarty - that's up to fate - he's just showing Moriarty what everyone forgets about John, just what he is capable of, when necessary.

[misaki_kaito]

If you write a sequel to this, it will give me SHIVERS. Gave me shivers at the thought of a sequel. Great job!

[_doodle]

A sequel? Now that's an interesting thought, I hadn't even considered there being any more to this. I don't even know what a sequel would involve, seeing as I don't even know if Jim lives or dies!

But, glad you liked it!

♥

[elethoniel]

Oh god. This was so deliciously dark. Oh wow. John ♥

[_doodle]

Thank you! I don't normally write this dark or twisted, so it's really wonderful to know that I've managed to get it right!

♥