No, I Never Told You (2)

Mar 13, 2012 14:18

Part Two. )

p:yunjae, fic, dbsk

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changmin_amour February 13 2012, 23:57:52 UTC
... My heart.

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changmin_amour February 14 2012, 07:46:27 UTC
*back to leave a proper comment:
Really enjoyed this, thank you so much! <3
I always love your writing, and this one was a bit of a roller-coaster ride, emotionally. but you made me hope, and thennn: ouchhh.
i wonder about stories like this... i feel sorry for yunho, but just as sorry for his bride. the story is sad, whether or not they get married but... married is worse. in a way. because they both deserve someone that loves them for who they are :(

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changmin_amour February 14 2012, 07:48:38 UTC
question about the end though: did yunho arrive with the decision to get married, or was it that he arrived thinking he was going to end it all, but ended up.. chickening out (for lack of a better word)?

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dystopialights February 16 2012, 20:38:37 UTC
Thank you so much, bb! I'm glad you enjoyed it :)

To answer your question, I wanted to leave it open, but my personal interpretation is that he went to church planning to go through with the wedding. You're right in that it was pretty much a no-win situation for everyone... and as much as Yunho had realized it wasn't the right choice for him, he also couldn't bring himself to basically leave his fiancee at the alter. It'll be a few more years before he's ready to do something about his situation - but who knows, maybe Jae will still be around... ;)

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forevrseptember February 14 2012, 01:38:29 UTC
DAMN IT. DAMN IT.

ugh ugh ugh i knew it was going to turn out like this but it still sucks, fffff i hate the way most families pretty much everywhere expect their kids to get married and have kids the heterosexual way :c

YUNHO YOU BIG CHICKEN T^T -beats my desk with my fists-

[i did spot a few typos heh but nothing big and this story was pretty much amazing anyway ^^]

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dystopialights February 16 2012, 20:43:54 UTC
I agree! It does suck >:( But the end was the first thing I planned for this story, so it was going to happen no matter what. Poor babies ;;

Thank you for commenting dear ♥! I'll probably (maybe, lol) go through and tidy it up, but I'm glad they weren't too distracting~

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lamerk February 14 2012, 19:24:26 UTC
and here i am again - totally in lack of proper english words to express my appreciation :'D
but i do remember this - thank you. it was really interesting read.

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dystopialights February 16 2012, 20:45:04 UTC
Haha, welcome back ;D And thanks so much! I'm glad you liked ♥

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curiousocurious February 16 2012, 21:34:44 UTC
Is it weird for me or am I the only one to feel dissapointed by Yunho?

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dystopialights February 16 2012, 22:13:20 UTC
You're probably not alone D: Unfortunately, Yunho thinks he's doing the right thing, even if it's for the totally wrong reasons. Or maybe it's the other way around? D:

In any case, thank you for reading~

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cosmicanomaly February 16 2012, 23:00:19 UTC
Ohmygod. Youuu <3

Yunho. ;___; You'll spend your whole life thinking what-if.

No. I feel worse for Jaejoong. =C

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dystopialights February 17 2012, 18:29:09 UTC
Ikr? Poor bb ;; Yunho's made the worst choice for himself, but I think Jae was expecting it. Even his magical convinving powers of teh gay need more than one night :'D

Thanks so much for commenting, bb! I appreciate it ♥

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cosmicanomaly February 19 2012, 03:18:19 UTC
Lol oh yeah true. I'd forgotten that was only one night. WELL IT FELT LIKE A LIFETIME, OKAY? So many events in such a short time <3

YUNJAE I HOPE YOU'RE HAPPY WITH YOURSELVES.

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dystopialights February 21 2012, 22:04:26 UTC
Haha, I kinda love that you'd forgotten ♥ Originally I was going to make this twice as long and follow them every single moment of the night... but that was a bit much, even for me, roflol. Good to know it still had the same effect, tho ;)

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