oh ;; Minsu isn't a pairing I read too often since I can't...seem to see the dynamics behind them but this was just lovely. Every word felt perfectly calculated to flow into place, every sentance linked up without sparing a beat. That one line about hurt and love in ii was exceptionally good to me :D
hyung, he says. mockingly. kasdjnsa Changmin in two lines.
And of course, that one run-on line in iv, god it felt like it was more of a dance more than anything. Seamless, smooth, something out of a dream. Memming because this was just so good to read.
because even if you loved him better than than->then?
thank you so much bb! ♥ you always leave such thoughtful comments (and ninja-like! i hadn't even posted this anywhere yet, lol :O) but this was such a splurge of stream-of-consciousness and rhythm, and i was very much going for the effect you described... so yay! rofl ;D
Was supposed to write articles or maybe sleep but damn it, procrastination. ): I really enjoyed this. I think it's quiet but very powerful although I admit that one long, run-on paragraph made my head ring a bit so I went back and reread it. I understand the meaning behind it, though. It adds to the feeling.
Junsu is, really, the most mysterious of the boys.
ah, procrastination, i know it well... i feel like the majority of my fics have been written when I was supposed to be doing something else, lol. but still, thank you for taking the time to read! i'm happy you enjoyed, all head ringing aside ;D
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hyung, he says. mockingly.
kasdjnsa Changmin in two lines.
And of course, that one run-on line in iv, god it felt like it was more of a dance more than anything. Seamless, smooth, something out of a dream. Memming because this was just so good to read.
because even if you loved him better than than->then?
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fixed! thanks again ^^;
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Jo. This looks like I need to convince you. ):
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Junsu is, really, the most mysterious of the boys.
Thanks for sharing, bb.
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he realty is, isn't he? ♥
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