Comments | eggblue: fic: Perpetual Love Machines (3/3, Dean/Castiel, NC-17)

eggblue

fic: Perpetual Love Machines (3/3, Dean/Castiel, NC-17)

Jul 30, 2010 03:30

fic: Perpetual Love Machines
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Part 3

( Sam growled and prowled, his dog sense telling them to run, run away again. He was afraid they would never run again, just stay locked within each other, become stuck there, some angel-machine. )

bb2010, dean/castiel, fic

Comments 28

wickedvirtue August 1 2010, 22:58:13 UTC

This story was so sad and so moving and goodness... I don't know what else to say. The way you simplified the characters to make them machines and still fit the complexity of their originals inside... I'm so impressed! This was an incredible ride to take us on, so thanks for that.

eggblue August 3 2010, 05:02:57 UTC

It was hard to tell sometimes how the machine versions of the characters were working out, so I really appreciate your comments. Thanks so much!!!

louisgstriton August 5 2010, 13:53:32 UTC

That was absolutely beautiful and heartbreaking eggblue, I enjoyed it immensly and i very much look forward to reading your other work. You managed to beautifully combine my favorite movie and one of my favorite tv shows, and i thank you for the beautiful story that resulted from that.

eggblue August 6 2010, 16:31:18 UTC

Thank you so much! I'm glad you liked it, as a fan of the movie too. And thanks for the feedback :)

kemonomichi August 25 2010, 12:33:13 UTC

I just finished reading this story and DAMN, it was so awesome. I was already a fan of the movie (and it makes me cry every single time I watch it) but this? UGH. I couldn't stop crying while reading the last part. The story as a whole was beautifully written, but the underlying sadness and longing for something unattainable was just so perfect...

Truly beautiful. Thank you for writing this.

eggblue November 15 2010, 02:33:52 UTC

The movie really gets to me too! Jude Law's performance gives me chills each time, and then there's David... and Teddy's voice...

I'm sorry my ending made you sad, but I tried to make it happier than the movie at least :) I'm really pleased that you thought I captured some of the feelings from the movie - that means a lot <3 And PLEASE forgive the super late reply - I'm really glad you read and I truly appreciate your feedback lots and lots. Thanks!!!

anonymous August 28 2010, 16:10:22 UTC

I very much enjoyed reading this. I thought you captured the melancholy tone of the movie well without this story being a copy of it. I really liked your characterizations of Castiel, Dean and Sam.

inalasahl August 28 2010, 16:12:15 UTC

I very much enjoyed reading this. I thought you captured the melancholy tone of the movie well without this story being a copy of it. I really liked your characterizations of Castiel, Dean and Sam.

eggblue November 15 2010, 02:35:38 UTC

Thank you so much for reading and commenting! I'm glad you thought the tone was right. Please please forgive my late reply, but I totally loved getting your feedback - thanks!!!