fic: Just As When You Were Living (excerpt)

Aug 14, 2011 22:38

This represents the tentative progress I made once upon a time, on the long-promised follow up to Flaps Its Wings, posted as part of my contribution for bones_ga Love Month here. It's still very much a rough draft and there are many things I would love to be able to fix if I knew how, so please bear that in mind while reading. I had originally planned on ( Read more... )

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fourth_rose August 14 2011, 20:16:25 UTC
*squees* Ohhh, you've got to continue this - it's awesome! This is a take on Booth's father I've never read before (and I tend to read everything I can find on the topic because it's one of the things about Booth I'd really love to know more about), and I love the tidbits of B/B's early "official" relationship woven into it. I'm officially hooked - more soon? Pretty please? *throws in a puppy-eyed Booth for good measure*

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eitoph August 26 2011, 02:23:33 UTC
Thanks for taking the time to let me know what you thought and I'm so, so sorry for being slow getting back to say so!

I'm pretty sure I'm going to continue with this just as soon as I have the time. I graduate right when Bones starts back, so I might have to finish my supposed hiatus fic after the hiatus...

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biba79 August 14 2011, 22:08:58 UTC
E! That was fantastic.

I love them arguing about where to leave his shoes. hahahaha. And Bren using her pregnancy as an excuse.

I can't wait for more.

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eitoph August 26 2011, 02:24:42 UTC
Thanks B! And I'm sorry for being epically slow at getting back to you to say so.

I'm pretty sure I'm going to continue this just as soon as I have some time, heh, be prepared to nag me as soon as uni is out the way - things might get done a little faster :)

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tempertemper August 15 2011, 16:36:18 UTC
Total agreement with others - pleeeease continue! I know what it's like to have something you're not completely satisfied with but rest assurred I don't see WHY and maybe this is a lesson to every fic writer - that we can agonise over something but if we get it out there, people gonna love it anyway *g*

I LOVE your Booth here and am intrigued by your take on older Booth, as many people write him as clean and recovered but this is another angle... would love to read more.

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eitoph August 26 2011, 02:26:33 UTC
I'm glad you enjoyed and I'm grateful to hear your thoughts! Sorry for being such a slow poke in getting back to you about it all, life and uni and such have all been a bit evil lately.

I have hopes I can come back and continue on with this idea as soon as I have a little more time. You're also so right about agonising over things that others barely notice, I guess it is a lesson in not sweating the small stuff!

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huronia August 18 2011, 03:09:53 UTC
More please! This was great. Rough draft? PSHAW!

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eitoph September 1 2011, 06:57:48 UTC
I'm working on the 'more' part hopefully something will come of it eventually!

I'm so sorry for taking an age to get back to you and say thank you - your comment is very appreciated!

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taikowinds August 21 2011, 18:42:38 UTC
There's more right? Definitely want to see how their relationship plays out and the whole thing with his father, wow.

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eitoph September 1 2011, 06:58:31 UTC
There may be more - I'm hoping I can pull something together eventually :)

I'm so sorry for taking so long to get back to you and say thank you for your lovely feedback - it's appreciated!

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