Fic: 5 Times Jeff Said 'Yes' (And 1Time Annie Did)

[elsiesnuffin]

Title: 5 Times Jeff Said ‘Yes’ (And 1 Time Annie Did)

Spoilers: All of Season 2

Word Count: 6317

Rating: PG-13

Disclaimer: Dan Harmon owns all things ‘Community’.

Warning: Multiple POV

AN: For teruel_a_witch  who made an entire list of totally awesome ‘5 Things’ fics in the thread. This was actually really tough once I got into it, because Jeff is not a ‘yes’ man at

Comments

[supercapo]

This is like the "Anti-It's always open season..." fic. Right from the beginning it's like an alternate universe where Annie doesn't sower at Greendale, chooses not to go to Denny's and thus never gets the tickets to Italy.

And I've watched too much Doctor Who lately.

But this was a great fic. Your character voices are perfect as always and I love the bits of humor you threw in there. Great stuff.

[elsiesnuffin]

I wanted to start as essentially the same place as I did in 'Open Season' and didn't want to repeat myself at all, and that was what started the whole thing. It's what could happen if I hadn't decided to make them so sad and depressing.

Thank you so much! I'm really looking forward to the last chapter if your fic too!

[elsiesnuffin]

ahem... OF your fic.

[gubeldood208]

Everything is this fic and nothing hurts. (I borrow internet catch phrases when words fail me. I'm just in too high and happy a place right now to make any try for eloquence!)

I mean, I loved 100% of this, but if I had zero taste and a heart of stone and somehow managed to NOT be completely won over all the way to the end? That last line would have done it for me. Perfect. Ending. You win cookies and awards. Award cookies. I'll leave it here.

[elsiesnuffin]

To me, you are Perfect
And my wasted heart
Will love you
Until you look like this

(I use movie quotes when I'm completely overcome with emotion).

[gubeldood208]

My name is Inigo Montoya. You killed my father. Prepare to die.

(I quote the most epic things I can think of even when they have absolutely no relevance to the given situation when I am touched and impressed by an author's thoughtful witty and good-movie-referencing replies.)

[elsiesnuffin]

Best friends forever!!!!1!!!

No, seriously- you win at life. You awesomed so completely I have no other response at all.

[midtega]

3 words. I love this. Seriously good stuff. Thanks for the shout out by the way and the fic clearly shows your style. You really had nothing to worry about ooc or things like that, cuz this fic struck the right balance between fluffy and angst in the situations that jeff & annie was presented (phone call about britta, first date intentions vs sex, and the roller coaster caper showed there still issues, but they're going to get through out so there.

So, I'm happy that I been proved wrong and that your far capable of being a fantastic storytelling multi takser. Keep it up. Oh, if your game for another one, while your busy with the italy epic fic I won't complain( I got some great ideas for ficcy friday. Hint, hint or wink, wink.). As a matter of fact, I encourage to do more side fics if your up to it. Its up to you, and I'm just a encouraging fan who loves your work. ;)

[elsiesnuffin]

You prompt me and I will write anything for you, babe. Seriously. Thank you so much for being awesome and supportive all the time.

[stephanierb]

I love the way you've structured this piece. The "one time" almost always comes last, and you've put it in the middle. The progression is still there, but the creative shift brings a new feel to the story.

I enjoyed the hot-n-sweet of this one. The complicated nature of the Jeff/Annie relationship is part of what makes it so appealing to me, but I really liked how simple things were in this story. It's a nice balance to the emotional roller coaster of IAOSOP(though unlike Jeff, I adore roller coasters.)

Great job!

[elsiesnuffin]

I love roller coasters too and at first, it was Annie that was afraid of roller coasters but I thought Jeff made it more interesting. Thank you for reading!

[engelen]

You posted this too late for me to read it at the office.
):

[elsiesnuffin]

I..don't know what that means, sweetie.

I'm sorry?

[engelen]

It just means that I spent a good couple of hours reading porn at the office :P

I likef this, but that's not unusual with what you write :)

[elsiesnuffin]

You read porn at work? Best job ever!