Fic: It's Always Open Season On Princesses Part 21

Jul 28, 2011 21:22


Title: It’s Always Open Season On Princesses Part 21
Spoilers: Through S2
Word Count: 6529
Rating: R
Disclaimer: They belong to Dan Harmon. Whatever he chooses to actually do with them is his business I guess.

AN: So...everyone have a good week?  I don't even remember where we are with this thing and I'm writing it.  Oh, wait.  We’ve finally arrived at ( Read more... )

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supercapo July 29 2011, 04:04:44 UTC
There are several jokes I could make here. Mostly about being first. And I could tell a certain someone that likes to be first on reviews to suck it. But I'll refrain.

Jeff really sucks at being a gentleman. He really does. And it was pretty damn awesome seeing him lose that battle only to win it by default.

And while it seems sweet that he decided he had to sleep in Annie's bed, something tells me this is going to lead to problems once she wakes up and can't really remember what happened.

I love the air of mystery you have going here. Camilla seems really Queen B evil here. I'm really curious to see where this is headed.

As usual awesome to read an update from you. Your work is always A+

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elsiesnuffin July 30 2011, 03:31:34 UTC
I thought we had already established that I always get there first. It probably means you're doing something right though, so I would just go with it.

Um...Jeff is an ass. But apparently Annie doesn't really care. You don't know what I have planned for this whole thing. Annie might never wake up. Who would be there to comfort Jeff? Why, Rich and Sergio of course! I think it could work. Engelen would be all for it anyway.

Now, you know how I feel about hearing nice things from you, but I think I did a pretty good job of swallowing down what you were offering here.

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supercapo July 30 2011, 04:35:18 UTC
You're really playing with fire. You know that right? You keep mentioning things like Jeff being comforted by the likes of Rich and Sergio, or the idea of pulling a bait and switch and giving us Jeff/Britta at the end. It's all fun and games but if you keep it up you're going to get an uprising. Your fans are not going stand for it and I won't stop them from lynching you.

So there you go. I hope you're happy. I wasn't saying nice things at all. I hope I was hard enough on you for you to not get all freaked out by kind words.

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elsiesnuffin July 30 2011, 04:43:35 UTC
I'm pretty sure you're the only one I gave that Jeff/Britta spoiler to, so thanks for wrecking it for everyone else.

And this was just the right amount of hardness. Thank you.

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nicodemusfleur July 29 2011, 06:28:21 UTC
AAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHMMMAZING.

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elsiesnuffin July 30 2011, 03:31:59 UTC
.....THANKS!

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moony88 July 29 2011, 07:52:38 UTC
Oh my God. So freaking close!
Another fantastic chapter, always looking forward to more :)

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elsiesnuffin July 30 2011, 03:33:00 UTC
Missed it by that much...

Thank you so much for reading!

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x_avecia_x July 29 2011, 07:57:37 UTC
Well I honestly have no clue what the undercurrent is here with Camilla looking like the she-devil but who cares? That was progress for Jeff and Annie! I don't care how many obstacles you now create, they moved forward here!

And of course, you just win everything with this line... That was how they did things in Orange County.

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elsiesnuffin July 30 2011, 03:35:07 UTC
I thought you would like the OC reference. It seemed like the right time period and the right amount of fake coolness that Jeff might have watched it to seem hip.

You don't care how many obstacles I create? That's fantastic! I can finally have Annie get pregnant with Kevin's baby then. I was waiting to bust out that particular twist.

Thanks for reading!

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x_avecia_x July 30 2011, 11:01:40 UTC
Um...yeah, no. No Annie/Kevin baby thanks - that would officially creep me out.

:D

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elsiesnuffin July 30 2011, 14:06:01 UTC
Aww, you're no fun! Okay then.

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midtega July 29 2011, 08:03:24 UTC
U know supercapo if it wasn't for today and if u are talking about me I would tell u to suck it. But I just experienced a rarity at work. Hotties came to the bookstore and said hi. Things are happening right now that would make jeff winger proud. So, this was an exciting chapter. Really felt jeffs thoughts here, if only jeff & annie had a proper one on one when the moment is right. Some one is playing a love game with jeff & annie as the pieces, but who? Pierce. Camilla. Or maybe its abed. Prediction time: money is on pierce. Its all I got for now, elsiesnuffin game is on when supercapo finishes the supehero ch. See ya soon.

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elsiesnuffin July 30 2011, 03:40:44 UTC
Okay, I gotta ask: Was there a hot air ballon involved in whatever was happening last night? You're making it seem like there was.

Look at you with your prediction game. Sometime you'll get one right. I can feel it! And it's on. I'm thinking I will beat you to supercapo's fic though. Just feeling lucky I guess.

Thanks for reading.

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midtega July 30 2011, 09:07:33 UTC
Wow I'm flattered that u think I would pull a jeff winger 3 way like that. But this was more of jeff trying to get with slater on halloween. But the weekend is still young and I just got paid. So anything can happen. Also didn't u say I was right on one of my predictions in ur chapters. Patronizer, anyway counting the seconds on supercapo territory game.

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elsiesnuffin July 30 2011, 14:07:43 UTC
I will bet you a FF prompt of your choosing that I will get to him first.

And...good luck with the tail-chasing.

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