Well, this is probably the best J/A fic I've ever read. I'm still spazzing out!!! You captured Jeff and Annie so wonderfully and asjdkajsakd heartstrings were pulled, I tell you! Perfect amount of angst, fluff and sexiness. When Jeff revealed his Disney Princess fantasy, I legit screamed oh my god. And the pink toenails! I love how mature Annie is in this and yet, her innocence isn't lost. The way Jeff treats her like woman but still has that softness when he is around her because after all, it's Annie.. just perfect. Everything about this beautiful and I didn't want it to end and I should really stop talking now because it's beginning to look like a commentary for my English class. I hope you keep writing! <3
Hey, you write about my brilliance as long as you want.
Wow, thank you so much! That really means a lot to me, being so new to this fandom (I literally had never seen a single episode of this show a month ago at this time).
The Disney Princess scene is actually something I added in only like two days before I posted, so I'm glad that you liked it. I thought it seemed maybe a little too easy or something.
I mean, for a first time out, to produce something so nicely paced and so in-character is AMAZING. I can't wait for you to write more! Now, all of the quotey parts :)
“Look,” he murmurs to her as he leans his muscled torso against her back. Annie meets his eye in the mirror and clenches around him at the sight. This is SO HOT.
Annie implores as she tugs on his shirt sleeve. He looks down at the sleeve, as if he’s offended that it’s allowing itself to be tugged upon. Teehee. That is a great line :)
She is rising from her seat and moving toward the sink before she even realizes it, but her eyes are filling with tears suddenly, and she doesn’t want to think about why it’s happening. She sees him react to her movement and sees a trace of a smirk on his face before she is turning away from him quickly. One large hand wraps gently around her wrist and Annie discreetly wipes her eyes before facing him. His eyes search her face for a moment.Okay this whole scene just KILLED me. Your restraint with their
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I cannot tell you how giddy your post made me! I did that spazzy thing where I get out of my chair and hop around the room for thirty seconds. It felt like the last thirty seconds of 'Defying Gravity' (which is a good thing, in case you don't know)!
Seriously, thank you so much for the support. I've got about six things I'm in the middle of writing, and they're all making themselves Jeff/Annie, so I guess since I didn't pick a ship it picked me instead.
Wow, for an uncommitted Jeff/Annie fan, this has to be one of the best fics relating to them that I've read. Definitely top 3. So much so that I've read it a few times already and it only gets better each time.
I would quote my favourite lines but then you'd end up with the whole fic, seriously. That said, this really resonated with me :
“Terrible judgment,” Jeff scolds with a smile and a shake of his head.
Wow, that is really nice of you to say! I have a few things written and I just can't give Jeff/Britta or Annie/Abed happy endings, just cute middle parts. So it turns out I was committed to Jeff/Annie before I even realized it.
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Ahhh, butterflies. This fic gave me butterflies.
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Wow, thank you so much! That really means a lot to me, being so new to this fandom (I literally had never seen a single episode of this show a month ago at this time).
The Disney Princess scene is actually something I added in only like two days before I posted, so I'm glad that you liked it. I thought it seemed maybe a little too easy or something.
Thanks for the comment!
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I mean, for a first time out, to produce something so nicely paced and so in-character is AMAZING. I can't wait for you to write more! Now, all of the quotey parts :)
“Look,” he murmurs to her as he leans his muscled torso against her back. Annie meets his eye in the mirror and clenches around him at the sight.
This is SO HOT.
Annie implores as she tugs on his shirt sleeve. He looks down at the sleeve, as if he’s offended that it’s allowing itself to be tugged upon.
Teehee. That is a great line :)
She is rising from her seat and moving toward the sink before she even realizes it, but her eyes are filling with tears suddenly, and she doesn’t want to think about why it’s happening. She sees him react to her movement and sees a trace of a smirk on his face before she is turning away from him quickly. One large hand wraps gently around her wrist and Annie discreetly wipes her eyes before facing him. His eyes search her face for a moment.Okay this whole scene just KILLED me. Your restraint with their ( ... )
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Seriously, thank you so much for the support. I've got about six things I'm in the middle of writing, and they're all making themselves Jeff/Annie, so I guess since I didn't pick a ship it picked me instead.
In summation, you are the awesome!
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That is all.
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Thanks for reading.
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I would quote my favourite lines but then you'd end up with the whole fic, seriously. That said, this really resonated with me :
“Terrible judgment,” Jeff scolds with a smile and a shake of his head.
Annie nods in agreement. “The worst.”
Really hope you write more :D
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Thank you so much for reading!
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