Comments | emma_daisy: SPN RPS fic: And that's how I knew this story would break my heart.

emma_daisy

SPN RPS fic: And that's how I knew this story would break my heart.

Oct 24, 2006 20:14

And that's how I knew this story would break my heart.
NC17
Jared/Jensen
944 words.
A/N: OK, so, this is unbetaed and I'm a little drunk, but I promised my dearest vartanluvva some shmoopy light boy porn for her birthday and this came out instead. It's porn, at least. No redeeming value whatsoever. Like a very wise woman once said, sometimes you just want to ( Read more... )

words just words, these boys

Comments 61

greenie_breizh October 24 2006, 23:55:53 UTC

GUH. LOVE it. You're brilliant. Seriously. You realize I never cared about those boys before you, right?

emma_daisy October 25 2006, 08:49:22 UTC

Hee! I'm only partly responsible for the J2 love. Your other half is to blame for the, er, other half. Thanks for reading, darling!

gracielu October 25 2006, 00:22:20 UTC

Agreeing with Joey on this one and you should just keep writing and writing and writing them all the time. And also? Good music.

emma_daisy October 25 2006, 08:51:12 UTC

If someone would pay me to do nothing but listen to Ani DiFranco, drink tea and write J2 porn all day I would COMBUST FROM HAPPY. Thanks for reading, dearest. :*

readerj October 25 2006, 01:15:51 UTC

Just gorgeous. The desperate urgency the boys have for each other.
but all he knows is Jared and this and he suddenly, suddenly understands, suddenly gets it all and he’s never been so completely terrified in his entire life
This floors me.

emma_daisy October 25 2006, 08:52:32 UTC

I'm glad you enjoyed, thank you for taking the time to read and feed!

mijmeraar October 25 2006, 02:16:21 UTC

Wow, just beautiful. I love how you interweave the emotion so subtly and that it blends with the sex so well, so we don't ask questions on how they feel about each other we just, know,

and he suddenly, suddenly understands, suddenly gets it all and he’s never been so completely terrified in his entire life.

Really gorgeous, thanks for sharing.

Just this bit: and Jensen tries to remember how to breath needs an E =)

emma_daisy October 25 2006, 08:54:58 UTC

E added and thank you!

zenamydog October 25 2006, 03:15:05 UTC

OMG!!!!! The link between the emotional stuff Sam and Dean are going through and them needing each other is brilliant.

Wish i thought of it. LOL

Great stuff. Really!!!

emma_daisy October 25 2006, 08:55:29 UTC

Thanks!