The darkness holds no faces

[ender_williams]

Every night it's another girl in another town. I guess that I'm trying to find someone who can match you, who is better than you. On some nights I do find them, but then i wake up and they're gone, sure to be forgotten sometime during during the day

Comments

[chunsakuma]

Hey Teddy, this is Cher. I just wanted to say that I really liked this piece and that I think you have some definite talent. The first and last paragraphs remind me of the feelings that are expressed in "Lover I Don't Have To Love". I personally think that it can be difficult to capture those feelings in an honest way without sounding desperate or self-deprecating and I think that you've achieved something good here. I'm looking forward to seeing more of your work.

[kellyflogue]

Psh...

You only have eight comments...Amateur.

Get it up, or die.

You're cute buddy,
Kelly f Logue

[kellyflogue]

Yikes...Cher, that was meant for Teddy.

I don't want you to die...I meant it for Teddy...But even then, joke. Sorry.

[ender_williams]

i know...this total is terribly dissapointing...now 11...apparently people dont care for this so much, but that's ok...i will bounce back.
E.W.

[beneath_surface]

i guess the only reason why i'm commenting is just to let you know that i read your entry and that i enjoyed it. you agreed with kelly that there hasn't been an adequate amount of comments. at least, nothing compared to your last entry. i know you enjoy criticism, but i'm not one to critique your writing.

Genius might be the ability to say a profound thing in a simple way.

[anonymous]

your writing is absolutely beautiful. you have a true gift..keep sharing it.

[anonymous]

teddy you words are inspirational....your going to be the next Nicholas sparks....and an amazing philosopher..i want to be with you. Just let me slip away....

it doesn't rain everytime you kiss?

[20_7]

your going to be nicholas sparks teddy! YESSSSS

haha. so i checked out that college you showed me a while ago. it's beautiful.

[ender_williams]

Hm...ignoring the possibility that this is someone playing a joke on me...you say you want to be with me...that's pretty tough when don't say who you are...
E.W.

[ppod]

i like the title...because in the dark, we can be whom ever we so chose, and that is comforting.
but on the flip side...i'm going to try not to give into escapism, because it would be so much more beneficial to alter my reality....

~p