FIC--One Day

[etain_anders]

Comments

[vipers_in_love]

What a great story! I love their little family, and the dynamics you created are really engaging. There's all kinds of sweetness, humor and love running through it all, and the characterizations were spot on. It's a neat way to see S/B play out their relationship...i.e. with a child, especially Dick, who comes across like a real kid. Kudos on the way you wrote his voice. The whole thing's a very warm, happy story...and in a very good way.

I think one of my favorite elements has to be the Dick-imitating-Bruce passage. That just cracked me up. I could see that happening so easily. :) Just like I could see Bruce as the dad, and Clark as the mom. That fits so well.

You did a wonderful job with this. I hope you'll write more S/B soon. :)

[etain_anders]

I'm so glad you liked it--and that you left such a glowing review--I'll be smiling for the next hour! Thank you!

I'm thrilled you liked that scene--I almost didn't include it because I wrote it as a flashback and I didn't know how to make it fit in the fic. I'm glad it worked for you.

And actually, while the fic I'm working on right now isn't S/B, I have bits and pieces already written in this same AU that I just need to fit together to make a whole. So yes, more is coming!

[etain_anders]

Thank you! I'm really glad you liked it, and that you thought it was in character. And hey, it's only been posted for a few days--I've missed posting's by my favorite authors for weeks!

[swingandswirl]

Wow. This is so cute! *hugs all three* Lovely characterisations, and the image of Clark delivering a Martha-esque rant had me laughing so hard...

[etain_anders]

I got a wow? Thank you! And I'm happy the characterisations worked for you and that I made you laugh.

[baffledking]

Awwwwwww

[etain_anders]

Just the reaction I was going for :)

[marag]

Awwww, how cute :) ::snuggles all three boys::

[etain_anders]

Thank you! I'm glad you liked it.