Comments | exlibris_tenisu: Merlin: A Chuisle (3)

exlibris_tenisu

Merlin: A Chuisle (3)

Jan 03, 2009 18:01

Whew, I'm having a really hard time breaking this up into chapters! Only two more to go~

For my records, this chapter is 5,824 words.

( Then, one day, a voice hissed through the slot in the door, 'Merlin!' )

a chuisle, merlin

Comments 22

nyaza January 3 2009, 23:32:50 UTC

i don't know merlin heart but mine is almsot beating histerically. the angst. god the angst. Gah, ARTHUR. Dim silly arthur ♥ *waits for next part anxiously*

ad_exia January 3 2009, 23:55:40 UTC

Somebody needs to get the whole picture next time, before getting mad at his favorite manservant! ;D

rainchild January 4 2009, 00:16:06 UTC

Allow me to gush some more.

*gushes*

Oh, and I'm friending this journal so I can see updates. Is that okay?

ad_exia January 4 2009, 00:35:12 UTC

<3

Yes, that's totally fine with me! Friend away~ :D

inmemorybound January 4 2009, 02:03:15 UTC

You really know how to write a heartbreaking and captivating story. I can't wait for the next part!

I am so glad that poor Merlin wasn't abandoned (you broke me with end of the last chapter) and I loved the bonding with Gwen. So sweet and sad.

What an agonising misunderstanding -- oh, boys! -- so I am excited to see how you'll handle the reconciliation and recovery, not to mention how the whole messy situation will be resolved. ♥

ad_exia January 4 2009, 03:10:41 UTC

Thank you!

I really loved writing that part with Gwen. I'd never written her before, but somehow she was very easy and natural to write! And Merlin has such good friends! <3

inmemorybound January 4 2009, 04:07:59 UTC

Your attunement to Gwen definitely comes through. XD

ad_exia January 4 2009, 05:00:29 UTC

Aw, thank you so much~ <3

dark_subaru January 4 2009, 14:41:58 UTC

WoW This story is fantastic: full of love and sorrow and hope and so much more. Never seen something like that. It is breaking my heart with every word. Merlin is like a little wet bird hoping to love and be loved.
Finally, Arthur has see some of the truth. Next time, ask before believing what your father says with closed eyed, Arthur!!! I wanted to strangle him at on point.
The part with Gwen was so beautiful. I want to believe she knows Merlin had given his heart to Arthur and, even if now he doesn't show it, Arthur has given hi heart to Merlin. Please update soon. The anxiety for Merlin's detiny is killing me.

ad_exia January 4 2009, 19:23:20 UTC

Thank you so much~ I'm really glad you're enjoying it, even if it is angsty! <3 Arthur can be really stupid sometimes, but thankfully he's not quite unable to admit he might be wrong.

I hope to have the next part up very soon!

betsyli February 7 2009, 06:31:53 UTC

Oh. OH. ARTHUR. He didn't know...he didn't know...
Merlin's little smile at the end made tears spring up in my eyes.

I really, really love this fic. It's epic without being overbearing. The hurt and feelings are so well done. And once again, the pace. Must compliment you on the face.

*reaches for Kleenex*