Can one of you wonderful francophiles read my composition and tell me if there's anything glaringly wrong in it? We're supposed to be focusing on the verb tenses, which I'm pretty sure I butchered, but I also need just general agreement, and if you have a suggestion for rewording something, it would be much appreciated. It's also not finished, I ( Read more... )

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there she stands. face glowing softly in the firelight. could any girl be more perfect? you try to move closer, try to catch every brief smile, backwards glance. she walks away, you turn around. suddenly, what seems like only moments later, you look to find her embracing someone that isn't you. you can only wish you were in her arms, and that is it ( Read more... )