I'm always looking to improve my boy so any constructive and polite crit of Haru will be appreciated! Please don't just tell me what I'm doing wrong. Give me examples and suggestions on how to fix it.
Since I'm screening replies, if you really need feedback on your crit then please leave a message in the comment.
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